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The Girl

Her eyes were a shade of sapphire Her lips ruby in color Rosy pink cheeks Her hair so perfectly Fell beside her shoulders Her smile beamed a thousand words She had you speechless You became close to her You loved her for who she was But did she in return Her Garnet heart Turned to a jet black Her sapphire eyes turned grey And she left You never understood why Was all that love wasted Was it all for nothing You wished for her return But she never did You then had to learn To live in a world Where she was no longer Apart of yours

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/18/2018 3:52:00 AM
I can feel the pain and the other emotions involved and that is what great poetry is all about...
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Date: 3/18/2018 2:56:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Annalyse - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
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Date: 3/18/2018 12:19:00 AM
The color drains from the love! Congrats!
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Date: 3/18/2018 12:08:00 AM
Congrats on winning! Have an amazing day! :)
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Date: 3/17/2018 7:35:00 PM
Annalyse ,very well done and great imagery, enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Date: 3/17/2018 1:38:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Annalyse - Congratulations on your winning poem - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2018 9:19:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and smooth flow, Annalyse. Congrats on a winning poem. (I assumed that last line should read A PART OF YOURS)
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