The Gingerbread Roof

the gingerbread roof decorated with wet leaves — baking in the sun 12/2/2018

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/2/2018 10:07:00 PM

Ooh, I can see that one; great imagery.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2018 10:53:00 PM

Thank you, M.L.!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/2/2018 9:03:00 PM

As long as the bread can be separated from the roof -- let her bake! … Lovely imagery with the leaves --- a garland for the bread. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2018 9:36:00 PM

Thank you! Mmm...fresh bread

James Horn

Date: 12/2/2018 8:47:00 PM

Nelson Mandela. The roof is Nelson's brain. The wet leaves are all of his sweat and tears. They are baking in the sun waiting to absorb more nutrients.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2018 9:36:00 PM

An interesting addition!