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The Gift of May

A March unstable, April drizzles
At last, now dawns the month of May........

Children gather 'round a table
Making paste of flour, water, 
guidance from a loving mother
with pictures drawn in rainbow colors 

Pretty paper doilies landed
In the hands of lassies, laddies
Creating prizes, cone shaped fans… 

Then, quickly running out the door
To pick spring beauties, one by one
Fresh lilies of the greenest valley, 
wild wood fern, and yellow dahlias
Gathering the dew-kissed stems
Sweet and fresh as dawn begins 
Filled with springtime, fresh with bloom

Innocence, was cut and honed
Into bright-sprigged paper cones
Accomplishments, each one to own
On May the first, each small bouquet
Ready with the vast array
Of blossoms from the pasture flowers
softly fragrant, gifts of meadows

The paper cones were flower filled
Small bouquets of sweet perfume
Then down the dusty road they trudged
Side by side, with grins of pride
No greater pleasure as a child
The thought of bringing someone smiles

Timid knocking on a door
 “Surprise...Surprise! Look what’s in store!”
The little legs now running fast, 
And down the road, quite out of breath
Behind a tree, where they would hide
And watch them find this flower prize
Must not....get caught.....must not get caught!
And always they were taught
That bringing gifts to make them sigh
Was worth a lot ..so  worth the thought
A thoughtful way to light one's eyes

      On May the first, with small bouquets
      they would rehearse, a verse to say
      To spread come spring, then run away 



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Submitted for Isaiah's Contest: THE FIRST OF MAY
4/25/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haight Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 2:51 PM
Lovely, Carrie. So much imagery and detail that flows so well with your well-chosen words. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 2:37 PM
CARRIE, CONGRATS in Isaiah Zerbst's contest *SKAT*
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 2:36 PM
such vivid imagery Carrie many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 2:28 PM
Carrie. Congratulations on your first day of may win. Love LINDA
Robertson Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Very nicely put together Carrie, It brings back sweet memories. Lovely.
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:41 PM
MY, a lot of work on this one, Carrie. It is really kicking my butt to come up with even the idea!!! And probably I have less than a few days to think of something. uggggg.
Buck Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Well done... well done indeed. Would I have your permission to email this to 50 - 60 elderly couples that I know would just love it? I would certainly give you "notice" as the author and directions on getting to more of the same. Again, well done. oldbuck
Richards Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 5:12 PM
I am flattered and honored. If it would just bring one smile to have a poem of mine read, I am a happy girl ! Thanks for asking Buck !! :)
Guzzi Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Wow such a great poem and memory can't help but get a number 1. Light & Love
Dlamini Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:38 AM
NICE AND WELL ARTICULATED AND WRITTEN POEM,MEANINGFUL AS WELL, KEEP IT UP HEY!!
Crawford Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 10:43 AM
I see this picture as if I were in it!
De Paz Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 9:30 AM
good piece of poetry
Ryerson Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:35 AM
One of these days, I'm gonna be the VERY FIRST to comment on your latest poem but you're just to doggone POPULAR! Small wonder...
Das Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 12:49 AM
The descriptions so rich and easy to visualise. Truly lovely...
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