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The Gift of Love

The gift of love heard in her words, like hummingbirds that flutter by, lift hearts up high. The gift of love seen in her eyes leads dreams to rise beyond control within my soul. The gift of love felt in her heart starts to impart a melody inside of me. July 22, 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/13/2021 12:24:00 PM

Hi John, hope you are well, crazy busy with business and have such little time for my poetry, torn between the two but our business Proto has after 30 years still being loyal to us, so have to reciprocate accordingly, love your poem my friend, sorry i've been scarce but enjoy visiting your page, you are such an awesome poet, well penned John. hugs and blessings, JENNIFER.

John Gondolf
Date: 9/14/2021 2:35:00 AM

Hi Jenn, nice to see you, thanks for stopping by. I understand what you mean, I’ve been quite busy at work myself. It’s been almost a month since I’ve written anything. I appreciate your kind words my dear friend. Hugs, John

Kenneth Cheney

Date: 8/12/2021 10:54:00 AM

The greatest of these is love. So states Paul the apostle. Your eloquent and superbly crafted poem highlights the grandness of the gift of love.

John Gondolf
Date: 8/13/2021 2:47:00 AM

The greatest of these IS love. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Kenneth, I appreciate it. John

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/12/2021 8:52:00 AM

For sure...love is often a path unchartered -- but the journey always worth one's taking, when love is all that is recalled and cherished, even in the passing. Great write my friend!

John Gondolf
Date: 8/13/2021 2:22:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Joe, I appreciate it. John

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/10/2021 1:44:00 PM

What sweet words! Give this poem to this woman. She’ll be delighted.

John Gondolf
Date: 8/10/2021 3:14:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughts and comments, Jennifer. I did give her this poem before I posted it to PS, she was very pleased. :) John

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 8/9/2021 2:40:00 PM

congratulations John. This is a beautiful poem. Thank you, Nancy

John Gondolf
Date: 8/9/2021 3:33:00 PM

Thank you, Nancy, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/6/2021 12:56:00 PM

Love does indeed inspire and makes the heart sing. I love your beautiful poem John. Congratulations on having it honored with a first place win. This poetic gift is going straight into my Faves! Have a lovely weekend and new week. Blessings xxoo

John Gondolf
Date: 8/7/2021 4:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Connie, the gift of love is certainly an inspiration to us all. Thanks for saving this to your favorites. Hugs, John

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/2/2021 7:20:00 PM

The gift of love heard in her words, like hummingbirds Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!

John Gondolf
Date: 8/3/2021 1:56:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/28/2021 2:19:00 PM

This is so nice John congratulations :)

John Gondolf
Date: 7/29/2021 4:22:00 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi, I appreciate it. Hugs, John

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2021 5:21:00 AM

So sweet…like a Hallmark card. Congratulations, John!

John Gondolf
Date: 7/28/2021 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Kim, I appreciate it. Hugs, John

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/27/2021 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win John. I love the sense of the ever progressing essence of love. This romantic piece has such a sense of the movement of the heart. The words "lift," "lead," "start," "rise" all contribute to that sense of movement. Blessings.

John Gondolf
Date: 7/27/2021 10:32:00 AM

Thank you so much for your insight, Sam, I always like when someone sees something in my writing that I didn't. I would like to say I planned it that way but I really didn't. Thank you for sharing these thoughts. John

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/26/2021 10:03:00 AM

WoW! John, Love is such a life-changing gift. Your poem expressed that very well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

John Gondolf
Date: 7/27/2021 2:43:00 AM

Thank you so much, Alexis, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/26/2021 10:02:00 AM

Beautiful depiction of the gift of love in few words. Congratulations on your win.

John Gondolf
Date: 7/27/2021 2:22:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/26/2021 9:38:00 AM

A big CONGRATS on your win, John. LOVELY poem. Janice

John Gondolf
Date: 7/27/2021 2:20:00 AM

Thank you, Janice, I appreciate it. John

Joseph May

Date: 7/26/2021 6:04:00 AM

Very nicely penned John, Congrats on your win

John Gondolf
Date: 7/27/2021 2:17:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. John

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 7/23/2021 3:55:00 PM

Beautiful poem. It gave my heart and soul a lift reading it. It is a gift indeed... lovely

John Gondolf
Date: 7/24/2021 3:45:00 AM

Thank you, Shirley, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/22/2021 1:00:00 PM

May your heart always drift in the lullaby of a tender sky, in the sweet embrace of love. This is so beautiful and romantic, my dear sweet friend. Your words are simply breathtaking. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 7/22/2021 5:46:00 PM

The sweet embrace of love is a beautiful place to linger. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Brandy, I appreciate your support. Hugs, John