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The Gift of Leaves

He gathers them all in his arms then drops them to the ground, the air is fresh, the autumn breeze is like a gentle kiss upon our cheeks. To my heart he sends his voice booming with fall messages. Little gifties from heaven I called them as they swiveled down my feet. Precious crisp leaves each one with a personality and color of its own. He flies up then lands on a pile of leaflets, a peel of laughter escapes. He's my sibling, my bro, my partner in crime, my confident one . Together we dream as one beneath a lapis blue sky, tinged as deep as his superman suit. Oh how I remember my youth, and my hero ! **** Align your rulers adjust your lenses step into the future with me. Today even the touch of one leaf or the scent of one Autumn day, can bring me back to those golden years when we were young, carefree. Gifties from heaven that they were and he, a segment of my soul. Together we dreamed beneath a Lapis blue sky until our childhood ended, and then Superman had to fly home.

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Date: 8/30/2023 9:56:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing your childhood experience!
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Date: 9/2/2023 7:59:00 AM
Your welcome dear Paige
Date: 8/29/2023 3:15:00 PM
This is beautiful Vie. Such lovely memories of your childhood with a much loved brother. Loved this bittersweet memory you shared with us. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/29/2023 3:24:00 PM
Thankyou Judy glad you enjoyed it
Date: 8/28/2023 4:05:00 PM
Vienna, your poem is skillfully crafted, showcasing a remarkable use of vivid imagery. Your writing has undergone significant improvement, elevating it to a highly commendable level. Your ability to captivate readers with engaging narratives is truly admirable.
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Date: 9/2/2023 7:59:00 AM
thankyou for stopping by and reading dear Sotto much appreciated
Date: 8/28/2023 8:02:00 AM
- The scent of Autumn ... with golden memories is lovely, Vie Rose :) - hugs
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Date: 9/2/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for reading and stopping by dear friend
Date: 8/28/2023 7:34:00 AM
It sounds like you had a lovely childhood, and a terrific relationship with your young brother. Such memories are treasures, as you say. They are the leaves of autumn, colors of a the rainbow, greatness of the sea -- we take them into winter and beyond, somewhere a new spring awaiting, nurtured by fond blossoms of the past. Lovely writing. "Gifties from heaven that they were and he, a segment of my soul." Superb!
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Date: 9/2/2023 8:00:00 AM
Deep are the memories of siblings Joe, thank you for sharing your time and comment with me
Date: 8/28/2023 1:54:00 AM
You really have developed into a fine write, you were great before, but even better now.. love your storytelling
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Date: 9/2/2023 8:01:00 AM
I always rejoice when I hear from you Silent One,
Date: 8/27/2023 11:06:00 PM
Such a wonderful nostalgic story that brought back my own memories. So lovingly described and atmospheric. I really enjoyed reading this recollection of past, golden days Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 9/2/2023 8:01:00 AM
thank you for your kind visit on my page Christian B,
Date: 8/27/2023 3:48:00 PM
Mystic Rose Rose, Wonderful sibling story with the scent of Autumn and a hero. "Gifties from heaven // until our childhood ended, and then Superman had to fly home." Fresh images of bygone days painted nice as any Norman Rockwell. -Richard
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Date: 9/2/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thank you dear Quoth for commenting, be well
Date: 8/27/2023 3:43:00 PM
Very spiritual and a touch of sad nostalgia in this, I do think autumn leaves are indeed a gift, glad you have happy memories of your childhood with your brother~
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Date: 9/2/2023 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Michelle God bless you with healing grace
Date: 8/27/2023 3:12:00 PM
Aah, if only Rose. If only. I really like this carefree whimsical write
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Date: 9/2/2023 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Tom for reading and leaving your message of kind

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