The Ghosts of Laughing Children

In the deleated picture is standing in an overgrown abandoned playground a rusted swing set once occupied 15 years ago 




Once there was a children’s park 

Oh, so many years have past

Glancing upon the rusted swing 

Surreal thoughts arose of distant voices

Ghostly girls giggling and hyper boys 

I cherished the old distant memories

Of we who played during afternoons

I thought of Johnny, David, Melissa

And Halloween and Easter frolicking too

The picnics our mothers prepared us

On summers and cool fall afternoons

Daddy played ball with John’s friends

There was so much laughter shared

Good thoughts permitted my sacred past

Thoughts of mom and dad’s life

And all of our little voices 

Remind me of the precious hours

Spent together playing and often sharing

Time, that was fresh and youthful

Now gone in amber overgrown brush

Gone in brambles of lost memories

Where children came to playfully swing

Here on this swing in shambles

 

 

@Bonnie Gay Jennings, or Bonnie Jennings or Boondoggling with Bojenn @Wordpress 2013 to present 2016 ~
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Puddifoot Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 4:29 AM
i was just thinking the same thing as craig - this would have been a superb entry for his contest! actually it reminds me of the one i wrote for it! i like your evocation of the past, and i particularly like the last four lines - a strong closure to the poem (amber/brambles/shambles, very nice)
Jennings Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 7:02 AM
Thank you, Charlotte. I appreciate your comments and your taking of your time to write this... I wish I had been a member then to enter....Maybe Craig will hold another contest similar to his last one, that my poem would have placed... Thanks again.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Ah childhood memories!
Jennings Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Good ones, too.... Soon, I must commit to getting into my second novel... I'm procrastinating and writing poems... I must get going and start writing the novel...
Jennings Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Thank you Craig for your wonderful comments! I wish that I had entered. as well.... LOL... Thanks Craig, much appreciated...
Jennings Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Thank you, Michael for your message. I'm certain you've also seen pictures and images of old deserted theme parks and those too ignite a sense of loneliness for our great past and for the ghosts within our memories... Thanks friend
Whatley Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Powerful write, Bonnie. The fact that past generations upon generations, all once walked, played, celebrated, and cried on the same ground we do today - has always fascinated me.
Emu Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Lovely poem Bonnie, sad reflections can still bring happiness. You caused me to remember swings as a child, well done Kind regards, Craig
Jennings Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:49 AM
Thank you. Nostalgic for me too
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