The Ghost of You, a Love Letter

Perhaps the prophet
was right
love knows not
its own depth
until the moment of separation...

two souls made
to feel as though they are joined
when they are apart
what remains
is the ghost within...

The ghost of you
my body is filled
with you for days and days
you are the mirror of my night
until always and forever...

All of you my love
you in a space full of sounds
in the shade and in the light
I number the days
you are the combination of all numbers...

When we make love
everything is surrounded
by the green miracle landscape
of your body, the manner of all fruits
in the juice of your lips...

From you to my hands
I live to caress your entire body
my love, your absence springs a trembling
in the ticking of the clock
in pulse of morning light

You breathe in the mirror
you have left
the taste of almonds on my lips
our world never goes outside
only a mountain can know the core of another mountain...
~ ~ ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 4:53 PM
Sometimes, those we love can leave more of themselves with us than they realize. This was written from your heart, and your feelings were so well expressed here. A wonderful poem, Ken!...Thank you very much for the nice comments!
Carroll Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 4:56 PM
thank you Kelly! Ken
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 5:10 AM
Ken, a touching and skillfully written poem - final line is perfect!! - Well done my friend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Hi Anne, thank you for the lovely visit.. Ken
Onclaud Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 4:07 AM
just gorgeous in its subtle sensuality and grace, ken... wow; fascinating!!!..hugggs
Carroll Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 7:15 AM
Hi Nette, thank you for the wonderful comment! Ken
Manassian Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 11:01 PM
OOPPPSSS....forgot to fav it! Came back to do that. :) Now that I"m here, going to give you a 7 as well.
Carroll Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Thank you! Ken
Manassian Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 10:00 PM
Wow....wow...wow...a tidal wave of beauty. You've been away. Good to have you back. To my favorites....Sensual and romantic. My favorite kind.
Carroll Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 10:06 PM
Hi Eileen, Thank you and good to read from you as well.. Ken
Sergi Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 8:13 PM
Ken touching and moving work
Carroll Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 8:24 PM
Thank you Joseph... Ken
Mcdaid Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 4:01 PM
oh beautifully penned makes me want to write about scrooge the opposite ha ha excellent piece dear friend really romantic
Carroll Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 4:21 PM
Hi Liam, thanks old friend..Hope all is well with you. Ken
Anglesey Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 3:25 PM
Sizzling lines and very touching meaning. Especially love the last line. Well done :)
Carroll Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 3:27 PM
Thank you Karen for the lovely visit! Ken
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