The Ghost of Schrodinger's Cat

(If you can't make sense of this, Google
"Schrodinger's Cat."   Then I think you will)

What is this thing that I may do,
that at this moment is no thing at all
...and cannot be until the it is done?
Thus having done, I must have nothing
for my rivalry with God.

This poor tormented cat
in every lifetime poured
but half a life and to this day
will play within a shroud, or worse

invisible.  She skulks around
the bleak, convenient pretense
of a time that knows
not of mortality nor

falling of the hours.
Half a feline ghost, she mourns
the absence even of the now
and maddened both by science

and by time, entrapped
within her whimsied box,
in irony, may righteously lament
but we, the watchers,
still will never touch

her quantum-spiked magnificence.
                 ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/17/2012 2:06:00 PM
Debbie, I like the "true you" hat best of all. Never get too serious. I love both praise and severity. Few good poets are ever satisfied with their work, and my dream is to become a good poet.*smirk* Just be the winsome lady you are. -Dean
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 7/18/2012 6:00:00 AM
apologies for getting you all hot and bothered lol you can edit comments, you know
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/17/2012 2:10:00 PM
Double damn...CHARLOTTE..Now I'm really in the doghouse!
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/17/2012 2:08:00 PM
Heck, the first time I try an emoticon, it doesn't work. :-(
Date: 7/17/2012 1:34:00 PM
now dean, debbie has spoken! lol I'll leave the in-depth analysis to her; maybe when I get to know you a little better I'll sock it to you, as you evidently want me to haha don't mind me, I'm just having a bit of fun, I will put my serious hat on and critique you, if that is what you truly desire...I'm a cc (that's crap critic) don't want to hurt your feelings :-) but honestly, I can't see much that is wrong with your writing anyway; you must be a real perfectionist (as I am) if you're not satisfied with it...
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/17/2012 2:25:00 PM
see my disastrous 3 goofs above. The comments were meant for YOU. (Hangs head in shame)
Date: 7/17/2012 11:16:00 AM
Now dean ;) include IN the verse a brief descrition of te experiemnt and why..few readers will leave the page for input elsewhere and it IS a facinating topic..even a good one for my contst on DARK for it is indeed DARK on many levels [watch those dreaded that's..I too have such trouble using them correctly I have given up using them ;) soon I will do a blog on it ..that should learn ME!] line 12 you could use [knowing] and leave out that? Light & Love Wordsmith
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/17/2012 11:37:00 AM
Debbie...I think an explanation of the experiment would insult many readers. I have already given them an incentive in my brief intro. Further explanation would detract, I think. Educated folk (that I always hope to appeal to) will probably already know of it. On "that"...I don't see it is a problem. To avoid a nearly essential word and work around it, is not appealing to me. It is not exactly cliche, now is it? In spite of my rejection of your advice, I do want you to know that I still always covet it, study it carefully, and value your thoughts. Please do not desist in presenting them to me. When you react t, I am always pleased. Thanks, doll. -Dean
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