The Ghost and Me

I rode my horse to town and back today
And passed a house so old, so bleak, so bare
The age a hundred years or more they say-
And found by chance a ghost who lived just there

I said, "Hello, you look distraught, my friend.
"A ghost like you I've never seen before."
He said,"I haunt this shack without an end,
"And still no one has walked inside that door."

"My horse just fell and broke my neck right here.
"I've done my best to haunt this place, you see."
I said,"Old man,it's time to spread some fear!
"Climb up behind, we'll find your place to be."

"Climb up behind, you don't weigh much, I 'spect."
"I won't", said he,"Last time I broke my neck."



10/22/16

For contest English Sonnet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 2:53 AM
Congrats Larry, for your placement with this fine sonnet!!! ;-)
Smith Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Congratulations Larry...
Bradfield Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:14 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:34 AM
this made me smile, larry.. congrats on your placement!..huggs
Bradfield Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Thanks, Nette, a smile is a nice reward for writing something and i appreciate it..Larry
Lamoureux Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Ha ha, this is great. Congrats on your win.
Bradfield Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Richard. Nice compliment and I appreciate it!..Larry
Lawless Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 8:16 AM
LOVE THIS LARRY!!!! A sonnet with a ghostly humor and a punch line....
Bradfield Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:27 PM
I'm so glad you liked it, John. Not everyone appreciates a sonnet that tries to be funny, but I like writing them...Larry
George   Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Great sonnet, Larry. Many congrats on your win. Lainey
Bradfield Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, Lainey! Good to hear from you...Larry
Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Larry, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering! Love the ending lines! Janice
Bradfield Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Thank you, Janice. I enloyed the contest..thanks for sponsoring it..Larry
P  Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Cleverly written sonnet, notably imaginative, ending line is killer Larry. Good luck in the contest. Heads up 'town'.
Bradfield Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Thank you, Paloma, and thanks for the "Heads up"...missed that one!..Larry
Ra Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 11:13 PM
Written beautifully love it
Bradfield Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 12:51 AM
Thank you so much!!..Larry
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