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The Gentleness of a Visitation

Like a young heart, the sun outshines, flirting with the billows of clouds, leaving a gentle kiss on the blushing horizon. Cry of mucking gulls above, visit the no longer alone, white laced-topped waves; its bounty full, a romantic love with morning gone. A tern with its black hat, near goldenrod, scattered in heaps, pecks on the length of the treasures of the beach. The tuneful sound of the spring ocean surf, rolls in, touches my toes in a tease, then runs away giggling, but not for long. Once again it rolls to chase me for a nip at my toes. 4/12/2022

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Date: 5/2/2022 10:21:00 PM
"Once again it rolls to chase me for a nip at my toes". Love this line and love its feel ....
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Date: 4/16/2022 12:44:00 PM
Your description about the gentleness of a visitation, somehow flirts with the readers imagination and is totally captivating. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 4/12/2022 7:26:00 PM
Gosh! This is the kind of warm, caressing 'visitation' that I like! ~ Divorced father with kids...
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Date: 4/12/2022 2:48:00 PM
There is captivating imagery in your beautiful poem, Eve. The first and last verses are great examples. Best of wishes, Evelyn
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Date: 4/12/2022 5:01:00 AM
A treasure of a poem. The imagery is perfect. You did very well.
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Date: 4/12/2022 4:14:00 AM
Just lovely!...sweetly enchanting. " Once again it rolls for a nip at my toes" The beach a warming tease of senses since time immemorial. Love it!
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