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The Tangled Garden by J.E.H. MacDonald - RoyalCanvas.ca

The Tangled Garden, 1916, J.E. MacDonald, Canadian Artist

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Kneeling in prayer, I ask God for wisdom today; Can you hear me God in your sanctuary way up high? Yes, God knows my soul for he is my true pathway; And I hear God's silent words falling from the sky. As graceful angels sing me a sweet lullaby; Oh God, I am darkness with feet stuck in clay. Be still child, I will send the gentle gardener is his sigh; Kneeling in prayer I ask God for wisdom today. Then, mother comes to me on the wings of a blue jay; Oh, no more capable messenger was my thankful cry. For she was truly a gentle soul always blissful and gay; Can you hear me God in your sanctuary way up high? Mom planted a garden for the bird, bee and butterfly; her flowers were wild, tangled and often went astray. I was her assistant till the day we had to say bye; Yes, God knows my soul for he is my true pathway. Mom has wisdom boundless and I confide just like yesterday; She has patience and listens till I feel that I have wings to fly. Tells me, I have potential and will bloom like a flower in a sun ray; And I hear God's silent words falling from the sky. I am at peace in my soul now but I must ask God why, why? Why is her wild tangled garden at our old house in decay? Why did my young gentle gardener mother need to die? Mom, remember how in lush meadows talking, we would lay. Kneeling in prayer, I ask . . . _____________________ June 13, 2022 Poetry/Rondeau Redouble/The Gentle Gardener Copyright Protected, ID 06-1464-476-13 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Rondeau Redouble sponsor, L Milton Hankins, Judged 07/05/2022 Sixth Place

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Date: 7/7/2022 11:37:00 AM
So tenderly beautiful Constance filled with the echo of your plaintive prayer - the prayer all of us ask at one time or another. Congratulations on your win! Blessings on your garden.
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Date: 7/10/2022 4:49:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/5/2022 8:47:00 AM
You are everywhere with your beautiful wrings. Great work this too. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/6/2022 7:15:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/5/2022 7:41:00 AM
Constance, I enjoyed your poem "The Gentle Gardener" very much. Congratulations on your fine placement in my contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/5/2022 8:07:00 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the inspiration and the contest and for my placement, also for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/17/2022 4:07:00 AM
Wow! A beautiful tribute to your mom, Constance, in this difficult form
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Date: 6/18/2022 1:13:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, yes, I agree very difficult to write in this form, blessings ~Constance

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