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The Gent Who Waited At the Gate

I asked him why at my house he had stopped. He answered me, "I have some time to wait, and here I'll stay until the sun has dropped!" All day in summer's sun, nearby the gate, he patiently awaited my dear sister, and now I shall reveal to you his fate. Evening came, and then to meet that mister came she who'd kept the poor gent waiting long. I saw through parted blinds her caller kissed her. . . Endurance served him well. I'd reckoned wrong!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/7/2014 11:19:00 PM
Andrea Another creative and interesting write that keeps the reader in awe until the very end. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Price Of Addiction poem.
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Date: 8/2/2012 12:22:00 AM
andrea... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD
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Date: 8/1/2012 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2012 11:38:00 AM
((()))Congrats on your very good winning work..I enjoyed this one when I read it before..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2012 9:05:00 AM
congrats Andrea on a brilliant write and win.. this was so unique and creative luv.. my hands are giving me fits with the arthritis from all thr rain we had.. and humidity.. oh.. painful and sore too.. had to take off my weddings rings for relief..oh.. when does it end?
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Date: 7/31/2012 7:33:00 AM
enjoyed the twists and turns here, andie.. sweet congrats! :)
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Date: 7/31/2012 6:57:00 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 7/31/2012 1:21:00 AM
Congratulations Andy on another well deserved win xx
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Date: 7/31/2012 12:07:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win Andrea...knew this one would be on the list the first time I read it!!
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Date: 7/30/2012 5:24:00 PM
Very cute and and excellent write!! Congrats on your wonderful win, Andrea! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/30/2012 4:08:00 PM
Great write hun!!! as always, keep p the wonderful work! <3 Sabina
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Date: 7/30/2012 2:44:00 PM
Great write Andrea, Congratulations on your win! Lov, Shar
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Date: 7/30/2012 2:36:00 PM
Andrea congrats on your win, it was worth the wait...David
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Date: 7/28/2012 9:55:00 PM
An excellent write on this form Andrea. Been so darn busy that I don't know if my head is on right. Tired and in need of a week off but Aaron is teething and not in a great mood. Oh well they grow up fast anyway and grandkids have grandma's heart. love phyl
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Date: 7/23/2012 8:47:00 PM
A girl worth waiting for I'd guess. Violet, Indigo, Blue, Green, Yellow, Orange, Red - colors of the rainbow in reverse.
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Date: 7/23/2012 12:52:00 AM
Oh well put write on simple yet important parts of life Andrea; good to read you today..!
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Date: 7/22/2012 8:15:00 AM
oh why the men always gotta wait??? well nice to know it was all sweet in the end!!...another good one my friend...enjoyed!!!
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Date: 7/21/2012 8:23:00 PM
Enjoying my visit with your poetry this evening. Keep them coming. Continue writing and winning.
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Date: 7/21/2012 11:33:00 AM
love this clever write, Andrea. Congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 7/21/2012 8:19:00 AM
Oie, another strong write, with your usual finesse, Andrea.:) Much here to prompt and ignite the mind! Enjoyed this write!! Best wishes, Mikki :)
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Date: 7/21/2012 5:58:00 AM
This was quite an interesting poem. I had to read it a few times, before I understood. It must be an "old man" thing. I wish you well in the contest.
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Date: 7/21/2012 5:12:00 AM
simply great on the wait theme Andrea.. best wishes as I recall this from a while back .. my hands r both swollen with arthritis this week from all the rain and painful at times but trying to do my hand exercises to keep them limber luv..at least my head feels better and am using my Dragon Program again to be on PS..thankxx for asking.. how r u doing?
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Date: 7/20/2012 11:29:00 AM
A sweet wait by your house Andrea, well written in this special Terza Rima poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:52:00 AM
Love how the gent was playing nonchalant and all. Guess he knew his waiting would not be in vain, ha! Lovely poem Andrea!
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:10:00 AM
I have been missing a lot of fun in PS. I missed you Miss Andrea! I wish you luck in the contest. Love Dalila
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