The General's Speech

A young man watched open-mouthed, As he listened to the general's speech. Who spoke of pinnacles of bravery, That only a fearless man could reach. The young man was given a uniform, And a rifle placed into his hand. He proudly stood on the ship's deck, As it sailed to a foreign land. Lying in a trench covered in mud, He waited anxiously for the call. Thinking about going over the top, Where he would see the enemy fall. At last the captain gave the order, ‘Righto chaps do your best.’ The young man ran but 20 yards, Heedless of shells hitting his chest. His memories spilled onto the ground, Where his comrades were not far behind. They trampled his short life underfoot, Lost in the earth never to be found. The young man was laid beneath the grass, Where he used to run and play. On his old school's roll of honour board, Was added another young man’s name. A young man watched open-mouthed, As he listened to the general's speech.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/7/2012 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Holding out for a Hero" contest Ken. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 11:48:00 AM
Belated Congratulations on your win Ken, such a waste of young lives xx
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Date: 5/6/2012 9:31:00 AM
So emotional and as it should be..on and one we go and the lesson is never learned by the young..for that is the diffinition of young, yes? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Ken Duddle
Date: 5/6/2012 12:18:00 PM
Did not know I had won anything. Cannot see any notification. Thanks for the comment. The poem is a few years old and I had WW1 in mind at the time and how the military used to go round schools recruiting then sendthe volunteers to the Somme after a few weeks training.
Date: 5/6/2012 7:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Ken. Outstanding write. Great job. Ralph
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Ken Duddle
Date: 5/6/2012 12:19:00 PM
Did not know I had won. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 5/5/2012 9:31:00 PM
So many. So young. Well written Ken
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Date: 5/5/2012 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this well written poem. It is sad but so true. Love, Joyce
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Ken Duddle
Date: 5/6/2012 12:08:00 PM
Thanks. Did not know I had won anything.. Cant see where.
Date: 4/22/2012 8:54:00 AM
I have 2 nephews in Afghanistan now. I taked my son out of going... tho they probably wouldn't have taken him due to health issues... But a good memorial to all those lost.
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Date: 4/20/2012 11:31:00 PM
Ken , very deep... Wonderful, always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have yourself a goodnight, PD ;-)
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Date: 4/20/2012 2:45:00 PM
Super poem!!! Let's see more... Terry
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Date: 4/20/2012 4:48:00 AM
wow.very moving. excellent.
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