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(For Gino, Joe and Ross Vannelli)

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The Gemini's Gist

A daunting press of gifted dreams
          The boyish boasts and sculpted schemes
               Brother, fore, and brother, aft
     Stead to ply their father's craft

Each consecrated to the rest
          A journey spun at hap's behest
               Sad the sojourn, seasons spent
     Demeanor, too, in slow descent

A tattered sheet aside the mast
          The binding brag that held them fast
               A parried genius pawned for pay
     Extorted art, la grande touche'

Spoon-fed faith to temper sins
          God's impressions, yangs and yins
               A sextant set to split the tacks
     Fair, the wind upon their backs

Betting talent - an epoch's wage
          Trust to rust, on scribbled page
               Pride integral, misplaced in time
     A poor man's Eden - a canted rhyme

So ford the moat, up castle's wall
          One faded echo, Caedmon's call
               Expired breath, a sparrow's verse
     To strain the wings of kingly curse

Scabbards crossed and gauntlet down
          Such gallant lads to charge the crown
               The hallowed chapter of gloried tome
     A heart-child lost, now hailing home

Thus ripe with moments to impart
          This rarest seed with callow heart
               A pauper's rhyme thru' all the years
     The sweetest music to my ears ...

A music poured ... to douse the tears.




Written and submitted on February 16, 2019
For the "Music To My Ears" Poetry Contest
Silent One, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Devonshire Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 4:29 PM
Soup Mail returned. Contest reopened for a couple more entries. Congrats on your win in Silent One's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 12:49 PM
- Congratulations on your great 1st place in the contest Gregory :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Congrats on your top win, Gregory. Well penned.
George   Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 3:14 PM
So worthy of your first place win. Congratulations, Gregory!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Oh wonderful! And that last line~ exquisite. Congratulations on your top win! xomo <3
Sands Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations for your top win Gregory :)
One Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Loved your take on the contest Gregory, this is really creative... The poem is also full of great lines... Love that title also.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 12:47 AM
Excellent Greg, a sure winner, my friend...
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