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contest-Gate

sponsor-Constance La France

The Gate of Pain

I scream at the universe
for injustice and unimagined pain
when my GOSSAMER heart opens
the gate of GRIEF-STRICKEN memories
    of a GHOSTLY face
that lies in a GRAVE of GODFORSAKEN despair
still GROANING inside my soul
where I crumble in tear-stained
mutterings of worthless thoughts
of days and nights that could have been
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August 19, 2025 at 9:52 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my contest, Gate/Gates Contest. Your poem is well done and I like it. Constance
Fowler Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 9:07 AM
Regret comes too late to free one from despair. Congratulations Frederic! :)
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 5:03 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs
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