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The Garden Rendezvous - Cm

Your face that night matched the brilliance of the light from the moon shining down on the rose garden of our first rendezvous. The flowers all around us blushed to see our lustful kiss, and their hundreds of eyes beheld your radiant beauty. Aug. 27, 2019 Contest: 'CHOOSE AN OCTAVIO PAZ LINE' Sponsor: nette onclaud Line Chosen #1: 1. The night was a garden of eyes.” – The Blue Bouquet

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Date: 9/2/2024 6:38:00 PM
This is beautiful, in just a few words, too...<3
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Date: 2/21/2020 5:09:00 PM
Andrea congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 2/21/2020 3:47:00 PM
As always, my friend, you have painted a richly textured poetic picture! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/21/2020 12:22:00 PM
Wow, a first rendezvous in a rose garden, how perfectly romantic! More lovely writing in your nature/romance forté. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 2/20/2020 4:13:00 PM
These wee lines have considerable imagery and emotional impact! So glad I read it. Got the 6, 8, 6, 8 syllable count and sensed a rhythm but could not figure it out; isn't iambic, right? I'll read another, love to, but we may have to hold class with me as pupil in the near future. Love ... CayCay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/20/2020 4:26:00 PM
That was a challenge from nette & did not require meter . I think I used more iambic in verse 2. Thanx for reading it
Date: 9/27/2019 12:18:00 PM
This is beautiful ... short in words, but packed with emotions. Love !!
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Date: 8/31/2019 10:49:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/30/2019 7:31:00 AM
A first rendezvous, watched by a garden of eyes! A beautiful interpretation of your chosen line, Andrea. Congratulations on such a fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/30/2019 4:43:00 AM
Oh, the poet's keen eyes, through which I saw this moonlit garden! Or maybe I was a flower. Congrats, Andrea)
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Date: 8/30/2019 12:33:00 AM
d.h.lawrence would be proud of you, andie.. i am... you are back on the road with this amorous, throbbing melody..sending my thanks for joining this contest and big congrats on your fine slot... huggs
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Date: 8/28/2019 6:08:00 PM
Fueled with romance, my friend! Beautiful!
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Date: 8/28/2019 7:14:00 AM
So charming, so romantic, so well written..a TOP win.
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