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The Garden of Night - Cm

Moon dust drizzled on mystique night, its garden gleamed above in blooming stars’ crystalline eyes, twinkled the dreams designed. The edge of night’s garden we reached, dancing on slant moonbeam to the tune of hearts’ symphony where our love lay enticed.
August 26, 2019 Syllable count : 8/6/8/6 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Choose An Octavio Paz Line Sponsor : Nette Onclaud Line chosen : " The night was a garden of eyes" - The Blue Bouquet

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Date: 8/31/2019 10:44:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/30/2019 5:23:00 PM
ahh, you saw that line the same way I did. Romance in the garden!! Well done,Subimal. Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/30/2019 1:44:00 AM
like a visual art, i am impressed.. sweet congrats dear subimal and thanks for gracing my contest...huggs
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Date: 8/29/2019 7:16:00 PM
I see you chose same line as me and made it romantic. Love how you did yours, Subimal. Nette ought to really be pleased by your entry.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/30/2019 12:07:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea for your visit. Yours is so good as well.

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