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The Garden

Such is the end when time began We live to find each others hand Such is the place where flowers grow The flourished meet to reap their sow Wearing silver, gold, and white Greet newcomers smiling bright Believing all that gives one sight Delivers him to promised lands In the rear there lies a gate And we will know what then awaits When journeys come to certain close And we are with the ones we chose Yet time must serve our purpose still Until all vacancies are filled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/19/2009 2:00:00 PM
Dear Yoni, Very well done I see the same theme in YOUR POEM "The Garden" as my "Enter Heaven" I usually write "what ever YOUR Higher Power may be"Convience to fit the Haiku and there are many on the sight that do Believe LOVE YOUR ending ALWAYS... HG
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Date: 3/6/2009 8:24:00 PM
Yoni, This is such a Beautiful Sonnet- there is a lot of dept in this piece..Incredible imagery-One day when we reach that gate, we will know if the paths we chose were the right ones....Some will enter and others won't.. I like the("The flourished meet to reap their sow"-Powerful~ Super ending..Thank you for your kind words on my poetry, God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 3/4/2009 9:33:00 AM
Yoni I really enjoyed this Beautiful Sonnet - I reckon the day we reach the gate all or illusions will be uncovered - God Bless you bro - MJ
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:20:00 AM
A lovely thought that soon our gardens will grow again. ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/3/2009 5:46:00 AM
Wonderful write filled with great lines..well done.
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Date: 3/3/2009 2:40:00 AM
Excellent write here Yoni. Very deep and meaningful. Thanks for your comments about my poem Obselete. I agree with what you said. Don't worry, I'm not praying for life to end. In the poem I am just imagining what it would feel like to be an old man left by his family in a nursing home. I'm only 30 and hope that fate doesn't await me for a few years yet. Keep up the great poems
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