The Gallant Night Kisses Victory

"The Gallant Night Kisses Victory"
As Night lowers herself victorious over his moving fortress she is draped transparent surrounded by a milky mist, a myriad of dazzling stars She remains unconquered Victory cannot see her The Gallant Night Kisses Victory The scent of cinnamon and green apples surrounds his crown, his sword en garde he checks, “Was that a sound, the crackling of kindling on fire perhaps?” his heart pounds for a while, he treads onwards, fallen branches, gold and russet leaves under foot, each leaf a bless'ed and cursed story, what they've seen in Lost Lovers Woods, He thinks of witches and spectral phantoms walking towards him over his hallowed Hollow Hills grounds An Autumn breeze cool fingers invisible trace his lips His pale armour dewdrop and moonlit dappled His noble neck, she licks, a taste of war he’s been in battle Tiredness overcomes him, his emotions burnt and rattled Sleep calls to him, but he does not sleep He watches over his emotions, keeps them like soldiers under control, in tight, in neat, concealed In the Quiet Time he hears her haunting whisper she strokes his hand on sword and drugs his mind “Throw down your gauntlet King, the Victory is all yours, I am your Night, And you are mine.” (LadyLabyrinth/2019)
https://youtu.be/xOCDUQ2zuXE Until The Ribbon Breaks – One Way or Another
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 4/20/2019 11:21:00 PM
Very beautiful tale; haunting and enchanting. These are poets' stories. In our hearts we are all great heroes (sometimes villains)--whatever, but always to the excess. You have a marvelous way of reaching and expressing the soul of poetry. Great job!
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/21/2019 10:55:00 PM
Everyone contains light and dark in their psyche. One cannot exist without the other. We all possess more of one or the other. The spectrum is never balanced evenly. Perhaps the 'balance' or rather becoming one as opposed to the other, only occurs when a soul crosses over...to wherever. I love writing my stories, whether in poem form, short story, or another format. Like most people here, whether cathartic, or for the pure joy of storytelling, writing is "a gift". I am thoroughly, Light and Dark, which one of the other I am more of, is up to the reader's discernment. Thanks for your kind comment Joe. You have a true "gift" in your writing. Re-directing now to "Joe DiMino - Short Stories section".
Date: 4/15/2019 7:42:00 AM
Fleurie - Soldier
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/15/2019 7:42:00 AM
https://youtu.be/Kugvsvnp06s
Date: 4/15/2019 7:40:00 AM
Fleurie - Hurts Like Hell
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/15/2019 7:40:00 AM
https://youtu.be/pUlX8ltm_JU
Date: 4/15/2019 6:55:00 AM
Pavrol Stelar/Six Feet Underground
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/15/2019 6:55:00 AM
https://youtu.be/SQyjS_Zr23s
Date: 4/15/2019 6:25:00 AM
“There are more things in Heaven and Earth, Horatio, than are dreamt of in your philosophy.”
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Date: 4/15/2019 6:24:00 AM
"To "throw down the gauntlet" is to issue a challenge. A gauntlet-wearing knight would challenge a fellow knight or enemy to a duel by throwing one of his gauntlets on the ground. The opponent would pick up the gauntlet to accept the challenge."
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