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The Galactic Way

Galactic is our universe
Enhanced by wonder lust
Of stars that want to show their tails
Before they turn to dust.

Much like my sister and her mister
Out to light the town
In their galactic Lamborghini
Loaded all around.

And if they race like stars that hast
To blind with their bright lights
They might end up, a black hole stuck
And that would serve them right.


RETA PRUITT
August 30, 2016
(For contest)

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Lewis Raynes

Date: 9/4/2016 6:35:00 PM

I'd love to be carefree..... with no consequences though, great write Reta, good luck in the contest

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/31/2016 3:45:00 PM

Very funny Reta. I love your humor. Lamborghini huh? Impressive! LOL Thanks for the laugh.

Reta Pruitt
Date: 8/31/2016 7:49:00 PM

Reta Pruitt
Date: 8/31/2016 7:40:00 PM

Thanks Daniel...I believe that everyone adds a little something to the soup...That's what makes it so good. Thanks again