The Fuzzy Bubble Bee

Bee Fuzzy Yellow Black Buzzing Around Ouch!

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/28/2018 11:37:00 PM

So cute, Caren. Delightful poem.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/28/2018 1:20:00 PM

You have the sight and sound in your poem..well written, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/28/2018 1:25:00 PM

Thanks for noticing, Vijay, and thanks for reading it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/28/2018 12:17:00 PM

I like it, even with the ouch!...Thank you, Caren, for introducing me to the Lanterne form of poetry. I'm gonna try it out soon...By the way, check out the poem, 'Honey Help' on my site. It's also about bees; you might enjoy it...And, of course, Emily Dickinson's "Fame is a Bee." Ciao! :) Gershon

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/28/2018 12:20:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon. I think the ouch makes it. I will check out Honey Help.