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The Futuristic Christmas

No more suprises now christmas holds, As day by day I’m growing old. This I wish to confess, Now christmas makes me pretty depressed. I was fond of natural yule tree, But now my grandchildren pick it from online for discount or free. Within a seconds the remote control automatically decorates, I fairly don’t admire this and just artlessly hate. Even the presents are now pre-ordered, As to make it a cinch for Santa to dish out them across the boders. Santa has become freaky and kooky too, He wears a glinting red coat with a sunglass blue. Now he doesn’t ride on a sleigh, But drives the latest fancy ferrari on each christmas day. Guess who is the driver Dasher, Dancer, Prancer nor Vixen, Comet ,Cupid, Donner, Oh yes its Blitzen. Rudolph with other reindeers roaring in a hike, Follows the car with their speedy bikes. Now no more he says ho ho ho! Rather heigh ho, heigh ho, heigh ho. Santa arrives with a rocking radio beat, For me its time to snooze when all meet him and greet. Well yes it still snows, But its colour keeps changing and even it glows. Remember the old christmas tree, Sitting around it with gifts and glee. Once the gifts used to lay below, But now in the air it floats and flow. Sorry if I sound a bit rude, But now its time to go and atleast cheerish the food. Bye bye the age old X-mas. Albiet its 2060, but still we wish Merry Christmas. 12/12/2015 A FUTURISTIC CHRISTMAS- POETRY CONTEST Sponsored by: Mystic Rose

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Date: 12/28/2015 11:20:00 PM
SUCHETA, Congratulations on your nice win. ~LINDA~
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/30/2015 9:24:00 AM
thanks
Date: 12/28/2015 10:25:00 PM
Sucheta, a very nice win. SKAT
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/30/2015 9:21:00 AM
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Date: 12/28/2015 2:06:00 AM
Very modern Christmas image you have created. Congratulations on a fine win. SuZ
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/30/2015 9:19:00 AM
thanks
Date: 12/28/2015 1:52:00 AM
Great take on the theme and a wonderful poetry Sucheta.. congrats on big win! Looking forward to reading more of ur work!!
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/30/2015 9:18:00 AM
thanks
Date: 12/27/2015 7:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sucheta, and all the best for the new year. Regards, Viv
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/30/2015 9:18:00 AM
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Date: 12/27/2015 7:34:00 PM
Yes, Sucheta, the times are changing for sure! I really enjoyed your poem, and congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/30/2015 9:17:00 AM
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Date: 12/27/2015 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/30/2015 9:17:00 AM
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Date: 12/27/2015 2:05:00 PM
Suchete, very well written and clever and creative! congrats on your top place win, well deserved! (and I love your name:)) -luloo *smiles*
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/30/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thanks alot for loing my poem as well as name:)
Date: 12/27/2015 1:48:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Sucheta:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/30/2015 9:15:00 AM
thanku :)
Date: 12/14/2015 11:06:00 PM
Sucheta, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/15/2015 5:53:00 AM
Thanks Linda for welcoming ,I am truely happy to be a part of poetry soup .
Date: 12/13/2015 5:23:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem, Sucheta! Keep writing
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/13/2015 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Rhoda very much :)
Date: 12/12/2015 6:12:00 AM
Great fantasy write Sucheta - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sucheta Dutt
Date: 12/12/2015 11:37:00 AM
THANKS Jan :)

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