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The Funoms Sonnet

The Funom's Sonnet Contest Sponsor: Funom Makama My man, can you be the one? My age will not be the reason. We can go out in the sun, and be us in any season. We had a day of joy and fun, we can not be a few heathens. Oh my, we can act so young, on our way to adhesion. Bye to us is not an option, we can be a concoction, let us get rid of all toxins. Go to the top of a mountain, to see our age old fountain, our sky lit up for the counting. ~Date Written: March 14, 2016~

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Date: 4/22/2016 10:12:00 PM
Age is just a number, and it is definitely not a reason to opt out of being forever young! Lovely poem, nicely crafted in this innovative style. Congrats, Laura, truly enjoyed reading the poem.
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Date: 4/21/2016 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations on a great write sweet girl :)
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Date: 4/21/2016 6:49:00 PM
thank you Eve :)-luloo
Date: 4/20/2016 10:43:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Laura..
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/21/2016 6:48:00 PM
thank you Dr. Upma :)-luloo
Date: 4/20/2016 2:21:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your placement in The Funom's Sonnet contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/20/2016 4:12:00 PM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 4/20/2016 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you very much for giving this very fine entry. The contest had lots of wonderful entries and grading them was a hard nut to crack, nevertheless you came out tops.. Kudos to you and thank you so much once again.
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Date: 4/20/2016 1:22:00 PM
thank you very much for my placement Funom! Have a blessed day :)-luloo
Date: 3/15/2016 12:20:00 PM
Wow.. I am so honoured. This is a fantastic attempt. Thank you so much for attempting this type of sonnet. And I wish you the very best in the contest
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/15/2016 7:41:00 PM
thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it :)-luloo
Date: 3/14/2016 2:31:00 PM
Great work LuLoo I've not even begun to think for this challenge - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/14/2016 5:13:00 PM
thank you lady Jan :)-luloo

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