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The Funom's Sonnet - You Won Samurai

you can be the sun or earth you can be the dew on grass you can see the way and worth see any ant dig eat and pass run in a big bay see her girth far you go cut and surpass if not sea go try the firth all are not gem few are brass god has put two box one empty now its you who has one key you can win but not for free bit by bit and try by try hit by hit now jet fly high omg you won samurai Entered Contest - THE FUNOM'S SONNET Sponsored by: Funom Makamakm Date:03/31/2016

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Date: 7/1/2016 8:45:00 AM
This is an awesome winning post....skat
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Date: 4/28/2016 12:41:00 AM
Deepka, Congratulations on your "FUNOM'S SONNET win." LINDA
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Date: 4/20/2016 10:44:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Deepak..
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Date: 4/20/2016 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you very much for giving this very fine entry. The contest had lots of wonderful entries and grading them was a hard nut to crack, nevertheless you came out tops.. Kudos to you and thank you so much once again.
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Date: 4/3/2016 2:30:00 AM
Such a wonderful sonnet my dear friend, Dee. You did it very well. I'm so delighted to read it. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for sharing your precious time reading one of my poems. I'll be back to read more if you don't mind. Good luck in the contest! love lots and hug, Galeo
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Deepak A.
Date: 4/3/2016 6:07:00 AM
Thanks a lot for liking my sonnet Galeo :) I love to read your creations as well ~ cheers, Deepak.
Date: 4/1/2016 10:07:00 AM
This is great! Thank you so much for this wonderful entry!
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Deepak A.
Date: 4/1/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Funom, I enjoyed writing on your Sonnet :)
Date: 4/1/2016 6:07:00 AM
Freakin awesome!!you describe that we are the architects of our lives in your lovely piece:)...best of luck my friend...peace, jill
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Deepak A.
Date: 4/1/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thanks for this lovely comment Jill :)

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