The Full Glass

with the palms closed arrived holding within an invisible empty glass destiny made for me and time passed I saw the glass taking shape of my life that I promised to fill up with joy and bliss as I travel the path God has paved for me and at the end of the day I will pour the ethery gold of fulfillment from the beams of the last rays of setting cold sun in the twilight hours and fill the glass to the brim to keep my p r o m i s e I made to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 1:12 PM
This is a stunning creation, Subimal! You do shape poems remarkably well. I'm faving...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 7:35 PM
Thank you so much, Edward for your encouraging comments and for faving it. I'm deeply humbled.
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 3:01 AM
Great winning design. Great thinking outside the box. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for your encouraging comment.
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 4:26 AM
- You have filled the glass wonderfully, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Richards Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Congratulations, Subimal. I love the concluding line - powerful in its simplicity.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 9:18 PM
Thank you, Suzette.
La France Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 2:06 AM
Subimal, oh how beautiful, I love the shape, well done and congratulations on your win !
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 9:18 PM
Thank you, Constance.
Gauthier Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
Agustin Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Congrats! Thanks for the wise reminder. God bless you.
Allison Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 6:32 PM
such and uplifting shpae poem Subimal. I'll raise my glass and offer my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 4:07 PM
- Congratulations on your great shape poem, Subimal :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 3:03 PM
I love the spiritual quality of your poem, Subimal, and the presentation is awesome! Congratulations on your win in the shape contest! Sending wishes for holiday cheer, Carolyn
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Subimal , I thank you for entering my contest, " Shapes". Your your drawing of words had feeling and great flow . Hugs Eve ~`*
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 12:17 PM
- A full glass of lovely words, Subimal :) - Very well done :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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