The Frost Bitten Leaf

O last withering leaf hold on to the bough
Whatever be the terror caused by the lightning
       Whatever the ruthless winds may avow
            Your glory lies in waiting until spring

                The sun did not cross the barrier of cloud
To save you from the tyrant hands of frost
                       You had the gift of survival endowed
           You are breathing still, all isn’t lost

    Take courage, hold on, don’t let it go
     The earth may prepare the hearse for you 
Chilling winds may move you to and fro
  The gardener aiming to pick you and throw

That may be true but, if you break in despair
    My plea not consider nor my counsel care
The delicate young shoots then who will shield 
                  From the onslaught of the fierce and cruel wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Bhurani Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 9:52 AM
awesome figurative language...
Yamin Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Thanks Rizwana. You are very kind
Horsman Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 2:36 PM
this is wonderful, i also read a very human heartfelt poem here.. your first post on soup, Mohammad, and a beauty....
Yamin Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Thanks Harry Horseman for your encouraging comments. I am grateful. -Mohammad
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 12:51 AM
This is really good writing, Mohammad!! I always enjoy personification and this was quite elegant.
Goff Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 7:35 PM
Original art MY! jimbo
Yamin Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 4:50 PM
Thanks for your kind appreciation
Mumtaz Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 11:19 AM
mpressive!! I am pleased to have read your write today. I invite you to read my poem The White Snow. And I request you leave some feedback. Thanks
Yamin Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 11:40 AM
Thanks Shadaab for your heart warming comments. I'll surely read your poem/ poems and express my views. -Mohammad
Ahmad Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 2:07 PM
congrats!
Nutter Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 2:28 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week.
Shango Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 5:47 AM
Wheresoever you are ... you must return and write again ... your magic words against our lambent pain ... there is greatness in your quill so long still ... o return, for I congratulate your featured poem here, and long for more to shield me from the winters despair. Love it!
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 4:34 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mohammad. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 5:26 PM
Mohammad, congrats with your feature...Raul
Winter Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 5:22 PM
Congrats on your awesome feature once again! Love, Shar
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Congrats Mohammad on the re-feature. We should live our own lives with the determination of "The Frost Bitten Leaf." Vince
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May 25, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem. More success with your writing endeavor. Ernilando
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May 24, 2009 at 5:17 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
George   Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 12:01 PM
I have commented on this before, Mohammad. It is on my favorite list. A MASTERPIECE!!!!! Your friend in poetry, Lainie
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 1, 2009 at 5:35 PM
Wonderful imagery and word use... you have a true poetic sensibility my friend! Best wishes, Keith
White Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 7:06 PM
this is a breath-taking and awesome filled write, this is beautiful and it forms a picture in my mind, it's like you are telling a story and I am wanting more, thanks always for your comments, take care D-nyce
Anos Avatar
September 30, 2008 at 5:55 AM
A poem of holding fast whatever life holds! Perfect theme! Brgds. george
Anish Avatar
July 20, 2008 at 2:47 PM
Oh, the terror of winter and the courage required to see it through. Keep it up!
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