Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- the Freezing Wind -

Dusk

                                    A glimpse of the sun's rays

                                    the basis of all life on Earth

                                       But, in the back streets

                                             The cold hands

                                               Face to face

                                              Every breath ...

                                               a tired heart

                                               The pale lips

                                             Your mute words

                                      a changing facial expression

                                      I listening to your thoughts

                                                 You strive ...

                                          against freezing wind

                                      One day the journey is over










15/12/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Poem of the Day : 17/12/2019

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Kim Rodrigues January 15, 2020 at 3:37 PM Congratulations on POTD! Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2020 at 6:36 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2019 at 9:48 AM Congratulations on your POTD. I love the poem & picture........ Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:16 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos December 18, 2019 at 3:39 PM My dear dear Anne-Lise, I did answer and congratulate you on your intense poetry and the honour bestowed upon you of POTD - congratulations my dear friend. Somewhere I noticed that I made a mistake someone told me, but can't find that comment. Blessings my friend. I commented immediately. Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:16 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri December 18, 2019 at 9:39 AM All around is freezing! Just your wonderful poetry warms a reader's heart! Congratulations on your POTD honour, Sunshine Smile! A great pleasure to read! Regards and blessings. Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:15 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael December 18, 2019 at 7:39 AM One day...Congratulation Anne-Lise on POTD Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:15 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper December 17, 2019 at 10:37 PM Back sweet lady with congratulations on POTD... Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:15 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams December 17, 2019 at 8:21 PM Congratulations Anne - Lise , on this poem being honoured on POTD. Very deserving....Maria Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:14 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin December 17, 2019 at 6:04 PM Congratulations Anne-Lise on POTD with your lovely poem! Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:14 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios December 17, 2019 at 4:59 PM Woo-Hoo. Bring out the bubbly! Congrats, dear Anne-Lise. Panagiota Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:14 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Knowlton December 17, 2019 at 3:34 PM Just love your work Sunshine. Another beautiful poem. Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:13 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf December 17, 2019 at 2:50 PM Ooh! A tug at the heart, at the sleeve, and at the conscience, Anne-Lise. Congrats on a fittng seasonal POTD write! Peace and Joy, Gershon Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:13 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams December 17, 2019 at 12:02 PM so happy to see this shining as POTD... congratulations Anne- Lise... hugs Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:12 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole December 17, 2019 at 11:35 AM Your thoughts curl gently around my heart. I read this without looking at the photo, and then- as I looked, your words touched my heart even more. This holds so many moments and emotions. Beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:12 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter December 17, 2019 at 10:10 AM When I think of Norway, I think of a "freezing wind." (I couldn't find the picture until I pulled up the poem from your own page. Good work, Sunshine. Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:12 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll December 17, 2019 at 8:34 AM Congratulations on POID, Anne-Lise. Sending a big warm hug your way. ~ Warren Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:11 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green December 17, 2019 at 7:06 AM Congrats my friend on POTD. Not sure how I missed this one the first time around but so happy I found it honored today. Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:11 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit December 17, 2019 at 6:35 AM Congrats Anne-Lise on poem of the day--touching write. Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:10 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. December 17, 2019 at 5:56 AM Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to congratulations on getting the poem of day-Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:10 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May December 17, 2019 at 5:21 AM A heartfelt write Anne, Congrats on POTD Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:10 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Na Na December 17, 2019 at 4:32 AM Congrats on your POTD Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:09 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior December 17, 2019 at 4:13 AM A journey we all must partake my dear Anne-Lise...but what awaits us...words can not describe...such an emotive write from your heart my dear friend...Congrats!! on a most deserving POTD!!...may the light within the dark, comfort you...^WW^ :o) Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:09 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Na Na December 17, 2019 at 4:30 AM I think you got the wrong person Jennifer this is Jacobs poem

Tom Cunningham December 17, 2019 at 3:26 AM Back with congrats Anne on POTD honours. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:08 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell December 16, 2019 at 2:48 PM A lovely pen this truly is Anne-Lise , so excellently penned. Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 8:07 AM - Many thanks Gordon, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Scott December 16, 2019 at 11:08 AM love your poem davidscott Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2019 at 8:06 AM - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Lin Lane December 16, 2019 at 5:28 AM Anne-Lise, the photo you chose to accompany your poem is perfect. You begin at dusk, the beginning of darkness. Though the night may be cold and dark, there is light, as in your photo, signifying hope. There is a sense of such sorrow. Take care. Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2019 at 12:52 PM - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

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