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The Four Seasons - Sq

Winter is here it starts to snow 
People are cosy by fireside glow
Christmas time brings fun and cheer 
It starts to snow winter is here.

Flowers now bloom it must be spring
Song birds happy they start to sing
We've left behind the winters gloom
It must be spring flowers now bloom.

Heat from the sun, temperatures rise
Longer days with early sunrise
Beach and barbecues having fun
Temperatures rise, heat from the sun. 

It's getting cold Autumns here now 
Summer season now takes a bow 
Amazing colours, reds and gold 
Autumns here now it's getting cold. 




Written 7th June 2020. 


For Swap The Verse Poetry Contest. 


Sponsored By Joseph May.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Makama Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:54 PM
This is awesome, so beautifully written. Well deserved placement.
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Thank you Funom, I'm happy you liked it Tom
Chutani Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:47 AM
Clever use of seasons in these quatrains. Congrats on your placement. Mohan
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Thank you very much Mohan. Tom
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 8:19 PM
Yours was an engaging read, Tom, delightful pleasantries throughout, my compliments indeed on your 1st Place win -- Aloha~@wk
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:18 AM
Thank you very much William, I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Watt Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 7:32 PM
Wonderful tour through the four seasons and the highlights of each. Well done in the difficult form, Tom. Congratulations on your top win. Cheers, my friend ~ John
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:18 AM
Thank you John, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
May Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Beautiful write on the seasons Tom, Congrats on your win..
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:16 AM
Thank you very much Joseph, I'm happy you liked it. Thanks also for hosting. Tom
Mishra Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:04 PM
A really creative idea to blend the four seasons with your gorgeous thoughts Tom! This is really beautiful. I love how you have ended it with Autumn. Congratulations on your win.God bless you. Keep writing and inspiring :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:10 PM
Thank you very much Aditi, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you've had a nice weekend. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful poem and picture. Enjoy your win and day...................
Cunningham Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 2:56 PM
Thank you very much Paula, I'm glad you liked it. Hope you too have had a nice weekend Tom
Proxenos Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 9:49 AM
Lovely poem Tom of the 4 seasons of the year - I wish you lots of luck in the contest - I find this poem so sweet! Blessings, Jennifer. I have written a poem some time back titled '12 brothers bearing gifts'.
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Thank you Jennifer I'm happy you liked it I visited your poem, well. Written. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Vangaveti Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Now why don't I steal this poem to teach seasons to my students!!! Brilliant!
Cunningham Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 2:48 PM
Thanks Swetha, by all means use it, I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Callus Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 8:23 AM
You have taken us through the four seasons in just four stanzas, Tom. That is how fast I see time going by now that I'm getting older:) Swapping verses appears to have come easy to you. ~ Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Thank you Paul, lol, you're so right, I think life forgot to put the handbrake on it goes so fast. Hope you're well. Tom
Ball Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Oh Tom this is great. Love the whole thing. So elegant in it's simplicity and the pictures are absolutely perfect. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Thank you very much Judy, I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Michael Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 2:27 AM
Lovely flow...happy too
Cunningham Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Thank you Arturo. Tom
Mcguire Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 12:54 AM
Great job Tom, I like your Autumn best
Cunningham Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Thanks Timothy, my favourite season too. Tom
Wolf Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Just delightful and just right, Tom. Marvelous penning! Thanks, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Thanks very much Gershon, each season brings something new. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 6:09 AM
Exquisitely penned my friend; as delicate and pure as a poem about seasons could ever be.
Cunningham Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 6:25 AM
Thank you Caren, I thought what is their four of, seasons jumped out at me. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 3:54 AM
Vivaldi would be envious of such verses dearest, Tom! Magically done! Blessings!
Cunningham Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 4:40 AM
Thank you Demetrios, glad you liked it, you've put the tune into my head. Tom
Gondolf Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 7:17 PM
A wonderful swap quatrain, Tom, nicely penned. Best of luck in the contest. John
Cunningham Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 2:35 AM
Thank you John, I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Faulkner Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 6:17 PM
You describe the four seasons so prettily, I think I like spring the best!
Cunningham Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 2:35 AM
Thank you very much Michelle, spring without doubt always welcome after the winter. Tom
Romios Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 3:31 PM
Perfect Tom. Another contest, go win it Panagiota xoxo You rock!
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 3:45 PM
Thank you Panagiota, pleased you enjoyed. Tom
Bauer Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 3:27 PM
you've done a great job with "swapping the verse," tom! wonderful poem! best of luck in the contest...
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 3:41 PM
Thank you Ilene. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Pandit Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 3:22 PM
A scenic journey through four seasons--a beautiful write, Tom. I enjoyed the tone and flow.
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Thank you Vijay, I'm glad you liked it. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Hello Tom this is a great poem about the seasons. We are lucky to have them. Each season is beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 5:43 PM
hello tom each season is special in its own way. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Thank you very much Darlene, we are lucky to have them, each one special in its own way. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 1:24 PM
a great way to do this challenge using the four seasons as the theme! WEll done, Tom
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Andrea, happy you liked it. Tom
Mcconnell Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Such a lovely piece Tom telling so well the seasons of the year with nice rhyme and flow. I love spring the best personally. Hope you're well, keep safe, Blessings always,Gordon
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Thank you Gordon, we had a bit of summer last week but it's gone like winter again, hope you're well too. Tom
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