The Fortress Within

Written: October 11, 2025, for contest sponsored by: Craig Cornish

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The obsolete stone fort stood ubiquitous and ominous, 
a layer was full of tales and osmosed senses.
Towers cast a silence that weighed on my chest—   
as the wind whistled through castle slits,  
It slid past the slumped ramparts.

Wet clay—damp air sighed in the gaps of dawn,
cold beared my step, which felt both cruel and vast.
Fear and solitude were etched into every wall~
yet my will flared, torchlike, in my gaze.

This castle—whether chosen or not—is my refuge,  
The roof evokes nostalgia yet lacks warmth—
I recall sunshine seeping over willow trees,
The stones convey the idea of fortitude. 

Life must follow me from hollow halls—  
to chambers where my pulse dares to echo.  
It ought to linger where apathy holds no sway~  
quench your thirst from the dark wells of lust.  
Shape a shield from the void that wraps us, 
It is dotted with heirlooms, built bare of love,
and grasped tightly in the inferno of despair.
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George Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 8:39 PM
"Towers cast a silence that weighed on my chest— as the wind whistled through castle slits, It slid past the slumped ramparts." This is the usual feel we get on entering a fort. The still silence and damp air trapped inside are at once capturing and repulsive. You have made the fort a powerful metaphor. A great poem as always.
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October 12, 2025 at 3:04 PM
a bold poem filled with deep emotions; engaging from the get go. I especially liked these lines: This castle—whether chosen or not—is my refuge, The roof evokes nostalgia yet lacks warmth— a masterpiece -- best wishes with this contest entry, Texas hugs, Sar a
Goldsmith Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 12:20 PM
"The Fortress Within" is a wonderful write. Great Ending... "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a fun day writing away..
Hind Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 7:11 PM
Raw emotion, it's so strong and beautiful
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