The Forsythia Blooms

White hoary frost on
Ground crunches beneath my feet
Forsythia blooms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Knop Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Well observed and nicely written Haiku, Sara! Now time is close when the Forsythia blooms again!! Tanks for all your appreciated comments...Gert
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February 9, 2010 at 5:56 AM
hot poem!!
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February 9, 2010 at 5:56 AM
hot poem!!
Crane Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 6:01 PM
i love this haiku ..very nicely penned sara :)
Culverhouse Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 2:17 PM
I like it!! sounds like these mornings. heavy white frost. YOu hoary lady!! :)
Mcgovern Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 3:00 PM
A prelude to winters end. Nicely written and effective. Love the style. Mac
Chamma Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 12:54 PM
GreaT Haiku...the title attracted me.. Farah
Owens Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 6:18 PM
I love Haikus and this is so beautiful...Marty
Fraser Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Plants are so incredibly hardy Sara, whilst we humans brrrrrrrrr at the slightest frost > lovely Haiku >> James
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January 30, 2010 at 12:56 AM
Nice contrast Sara.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian.
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 7:15 PM
wow, is this for the contest, sara? I think it is one of the best ones I 've seen about spring on its way! Luv, Andrea
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January 29, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Thankxx for all your comments to me Sara.. my decision to leave Soup is definite.. I just posted more information on my last poem if u care to read... thankxxx for being a dear true friend... luv.. Linda-Marie
Mitchell Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 3:27 AM
I love the imagery here in your haiku. Very vivid! Thamk you for your comments on my poems.
Freeman Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 9:22 AM
A grand tribute to the Forsythia Sara. Beautiful Haiku. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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January 28, 2010 at 9:22 AM
In New Jersey we used to always await the arrival of the Forsythias in spring, early bloomers that appear while the "white hoary frost" is till on the ground. Thank you for reminding us of how delightful it is to see these flowers emerge as harbingers of spring. Nice haiku, Sara! Love, carolyn
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January 28, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Interesting approach!!! My book `Alike and Asparagus` (fiction) is published and you can find it in some bookshops from UK or USA and on www.authorhouse.com, www.amazon.co.uk and so on. I hope you will like it. With love, Florentina
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