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The Forsythia Blooms

White hoary frost on
Ground crunches beneath my feet
Forsythia blooms

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/1/2010 6:47:00 AM

Well observed and nicely written Haiku, Sara! Now time is close when the Forsythia blooms again!! Tanks for all your appreciated comments...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/9/2010 5:56:00 AM

hot poem!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/9/2010 5:56:00 AM

hot poem!!

Marcus Crane

Date: 2/3/2010 6:01:00 PM

i love this haiku ..very nicely penned sara :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/3/2010 2:17:00 PM

I like it!! sounds like these mornings. heavy white frost. YOu hoary lady!! :)

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 2/2/2010 3:00:00 PM

A prelude to winters end. Nicely written and effective. Love the style. Mac

Farah Chamma

Date: 2/1/2010 12:54:00 PM

GreaT Haiku...the title attracted me.. Farah

Marty Owens

Date: 1/31/2010 6:18:00 PM

I love Haikus and this is so beautiful...Marty

James Fraser

Date: 1/31/2010 7:35:00 AM

Plants are so incredibly hardy Sara, whilst we humans brrrrrrrrr at the slightest frost > lovely Haiku >> James

Brian Strand

Date: 1/30/2010 12:56:00 AM

Nice contrast Sara.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2010 7:15:00 PM

wow, is this for the contest, sara? I think it is one of the best ones I 've seen about spring on its way! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/29/2010 5:26:00 AM

Thankxx for all your comments to me Sara.. my decision to leave Soup is definite.. I just posted more information on my last poem if u care to read... thankxxx for being a dear true friend... luv.. Linda-Marie

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 1/29/2010 3:27:00 AM

I love the imagery here in your haiku. Very vivid! Thamk you for your comments on my poems.

John Freeman

Date: 1/28/2010 9:22:00 AM

A grand tribute to the Forsythia Sara. Beautiful Haiku. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/28/2010 9:22:00 AM

In New Jersey we used to always await the arrival of the Forsythias in spring, early bloomers that appear while the "white hoary frost" is till on the ground. Thank you for reminding us of how delightful it is to see these flowers emerge as harbingers of spring. Nice haiku, Sara! Love, carolyn

Florentina Laic

Date: 1/28/2010 9:21:00 AM

Interesting approach!!! My book `Alike and Asparagus` (fiction) is published and you can find it in some bookshops from UK or USA and on www.authorhouse.com, www.amazon.co.uk and so on. I hope you will like it. With love, Florentina

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