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The Forgiven

Held captive and caged in a tin shed, an old steam train sulks in its own stillness, a relic from another age. Its skin is cold and hard and has the smell of vintage grease. The fire that once blazed in its belly has withered to a coating of black soot stuck to the bottom of a furnace box, the steamy snort from its nostrils, silenced to a dewy drip. The huge wheels that were pumped by furious pistons have come to a halt and now are welded to rails by rust. Admirers lovingly pat its iron carcass. The poisons it spewed out clogging the lungs of a generation have dissipated in memory, its breath now sweetened by a forgiving nostalgia, the veneer of a more innocent past. Somewhere, stuck on a siding, its brutish beauty still sits panting in the damp of an autumn afternoon, immune from time, absolved of guilt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/17/2023 4:00:00 PM
A very atmospheric poem pointing out the contrast between a rusting relic of earlier times and the polished presence of a refurbished museum piece suitably labelled. It tacitly reminds us all that we tend to play down the pollution generated by the technology of earlier generations, when we understood far less about the ecosystem of our precious planet and its fragility.
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/18/2023 7:24:00 PM
Hi John, very much appreciate your thoughts on the poem and taking the time to comment. Always a treat to hear such considered contemplation on the content of a poem...very grateful.
Date: 3/15/2023 10:20:00 AM
I like this kind of poetry, giving human elements in inanimate objects. Good stuff here, my friend. from one who loved trains as a boy. A very cool poem:)
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/15/2023 1:43:00 PM
Hard not to like trains, we have a steamer running on a nearby line on the weekend for the enthusiasts, the sound of the whistle is soul music. Appreciate your comments Daniel.

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