The Forgiven

Held captive and caged
in a tin shed,
an old steam train sulks
in its own stillness, a relic
from another age.
Its skin is cold and hard
and has the smell 
of vintage grease. 

The fire that once blazed 
in its belly has withered 
to a coating of black soot
stuck to the bottom 
of a furnace box,
the steamy snort
from its nostrils, silenced
to a dewy drip. The huge
wheels that were pumped 
by furious pistons
have come to a halt
and now are welded 
to rails by rust. 

Admirers lovingly pat
its iron carcass. The poisons
it spewed out clogging the lungs
of a generation have dissipated
in memory, its breath now
sweetened by a forgiving 
nostalgia, the veneer
of a more innocent past.
Somewhere,
stuck on a siding,
its brutish beauty 
still sits panting in the damp 
of an autumn afternoon, 
immune from time, 
absolved of guilt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Davison Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 4:00 PM
A very atmospheric poem pointing out the contrast between a rusting relic of earlier times and the polished presence of a refurbished museum piece suitably labelled. It tacitly reminds us all that we tend to play down the pollution generated by the technology of earlier generations, when we understood far less about the ecosystem of our precious planet and its fragility.
Willason Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 7:24 PM
Hi John, very much appreciate your thoughts on the poem and taking the time to comment. Always a treat to hear such considered contemplation on the content of a poem...very grateful.
Turner Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:20 AM
I like this kind of poetry, giving human elements in inanimate objects. Good stuff here, my friend. from one who loved trains as a boy. A very cool poem:)
Willason Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 1:43 PM
Hard not to like trains, we have a steamer running on a nearby line on the weekend for the enthusiasts, the sound of the whistle is soul music. Appreciate your comments Daniel.
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