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The Forever Trail

They roam miles over hillsides stride aimlessly cross open plains and grassy fields unseen and silent to all cept' those who see with more then their eyes, hear with more then their ears, and believe with more then their hearts and minds. Twilight,a gray blue haze,settles in quiet, no sound(s) heard but those of time almost forgotten souls lost, blanketed by death foot-steps hushed by time travel now in ghostly silence their destiny, to travel the forever trail. Physical lives long shed in defense of the very ground they are now one with their cries must be heard! always honored never to be forgotten lest their lives were sacrificed for naught. Melody A. Coster

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/12/2009 9:21:00 AM
Our lives are a forever trail as such, who wants to live forever, ME - the learning would be incredible>James
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Date: 11/19/2008 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2008 7:55:00 PM
Very haunting and thought evoking with universal message. Sensational writing, Melody. Lainie
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Date: 11/17/2008 12:45:00 PM
Nice imagery in this poem. Love the ending message. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/17/2008 9:26:00 AM
Congrats Melody on "The Forever Trail" being featured. Vince
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Date: 11/17/2008 6:26:00 AM
Well deserved to be featured this week. A strong poem about strong people who should be remembered!~ Carrie
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Date: 8/30/2008 8:00:00 AM
Melody - This poem is very well written with a great story line and fantastic ending - God bless
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