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fall colors... | Fall pictures, Autumn scenery, Autumn scenes

leaves are falling in rainbow colors and the forest sighs the trees wear golden gowns the squirrels are busy gathering food many birds fly south in formation others still sing in branches I love the ~ swirl twirl and whirl falling down down ____________________ September 4, 2021 Poetry/Merse/Verse/the forest sighs Copyright Protected, ID 09-138-594-04 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Merse - Beauty Of Fall sponsor, Malabika Ray Choudhury, Judged 09/24/2021 First Place

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Date: 10/26/2021 9:38:00 PM
Dear Constance, your expressive pen captures the beauty of Fall with lovely color and movement. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/27/2021 7:50:00 AM
Susan, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/27/2021 5:45:00 AM
Such lovely autumnal imagery Constance, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/27/2021 7:51:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/26/2021 10:47:00 AM
Great feeling and imagery , Constance, there are tons of acorns on the ground right now for all those squirrels. Congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/26/2021 4:58:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the compliment, comment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/26/2021 6:39:00 AM
Lovely color and motion of leaves! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/26/2021 4:58:00 PM
Kim, thank you for the comment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/26/2021 6:02:00 AM
Awwww...what a lovely picture complementing the beautiful poem! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/26/2021 4:59:00 PM
Mala, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/26/2021 1:38:00 AM
"I love the ~ swirl twirl and whirl falling down" Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/26/2021 5:00:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/25/2021 10:59:00 AM
A beautiful picture Constance! I love the sense of movement in your "swirl," "twirl," "whirl" as you let autumn unfurl before our eyes! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of the season to you!
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Date: 9/26/2021 5:00:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/25/2021 10:30:00 AM
Constance, congrats! very picturesque!
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Date: 9/26/2021 5:01:00 PM
Krish, thanks for the congrats and the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/24/2021 7:01:00 PM
Love it Constance. Congrats and God bless you this beautiful season. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/26/2021 5:02:00 PM
Gina, thanks for the compliment and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/6/2021 2:14:00 AM
Constance, This is a haunting work with divine imagery and great rhythm. Thanks for recent contest placement Howard
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Date: 9/6/2021 12:32:00 PM
Howard, thanks for the visit and the compliment on my poem and you are welcome for you win in my contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/5/2021 6:42:00 AM
"I love the swirl ~ twirl and whirl falling down down" ...and in the quiet of the woods you can hear them falling like crispy raindrops.....Beautiful write Constance
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Date: 9/5/2021 7:25:00 AM
John, thank you so much for the lovely comment and the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/5/2021 1:04:00 AM
Constance,Your blog comment is much appreciated..nice Autumn colours in this verse..a wistful time though
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Date: 9/5/2021 7:27:00 AM
Brian, thank you for teaching me to make my lines meaningful and to flow on the page, and for your informative daily blogs, I will miss it all and thank you for the compliment on my poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/4/2021 12:20:00 PM
Beautiful Constance. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 9/5/2021 7:28:00 AM
Heidi, thank you for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/4/2021 9:32:00 AM
So beautiful. Loved it. You're so truly gifted, Constance. Best wishes in Malabika's contest.
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Date: 9/5/2021 7:29:00 AM
Milt, thank you for the compliment on the poem and on my writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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