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The Forest

I inhale the crisp air, and it smells of life and of earth; and the scent of the forest, so sweet within the silence. There was a loneliness- an isolation, a beauty and tranquility; trees give way to fields of green, and wildflowers grow in every hue. There are sounds all around, the twitter of a bird- a squirrel foraging; it all blends seamlessly, in a perfect tranquil harmony. I hear the sound of rushing water, a waterfall falls over cliffs; I let the water trickle on my skin, and drink the sweetness. On a wet mossy rock I rest, and silver fish swim in the blue; then suddenly the sun is peaking, and I must leave this dream. ________________________ September 30, 2012 Poetry/Verse/The Forest Copyright Protected, ID 09-424-553-30 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Submitted to the Premier contest 100 In A Row - part 2 sponsor, Poet Destroyer, Judged 11/2012 Second Place

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Date: 9/4/2016 6:10:00 PM
BW, congrats on your placement with this once again amazing poem lady :)-luloo
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Date: 8/20/2016 12:04:00 AM
This is so enchanting. You carry the reader to the heart of this forest. Nice pic to go with. Congrats on your high place. Love Sunita :)
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Date: 8/19/2016 5:13:00 PM
Great seeing an older piece from you Constance...lovely...congrats
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Date: 8/19/2016 8:23:00 AM
Beautiful win BW, congratulations.
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Date: 8/19/2016 4:47:00 AM
This is very lovely, Constance:) Congratulations on your well deserved win:)
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Date: 8/19/2016 1:18:00 AM
Broken Wings. Congrats on your great poem. I was there with you in the forest; that is, until you had to leave. I shall stay in your forest. Bless you my friend. Curtis.
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Date: 8/18/2016 7:29:00 PM
Captivating write, Broken Wings, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Don't Come" if you'd like. Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/27/2012 2:38:00 PM
I love how your pen flowed so nice in this work of poetic art... hugs always Michael
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Date: 10/10/2012 11:00:00 AM
just enjoying this one again, my friend. Hope you are feeling better and had a great Thanksgiving xx
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Date: 10/9/2012 4:10:00 PM
this is beautiful Constance, the imagery is awesome, good luck in the contest....
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Date: 10/7/2012 1:32:00 PM
just love this, my friend. congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 10/1/2012 1:33:00 PM
'suddenly the was sinking...' such a luvly line here. i greatly luv this piece.
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Date: 9/30/2012 6:01:00 PM
I was taken to this place of serenity for a while...and enjoyed the beautiful scenery too, Constance! So glad to be reading you once again. I've missed you. Best of luck in the contest. Always, Annalise
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Date: 9/30/2012 3:36:00 PM
This is such a beautiful write my friend, I really enjoyed the clever and ingenious poem! What a fully delightful piece, I loved reading this poem this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/30/2012 2:42:00 PM
A lovely poem for contest Constance. Wish you luck - hope your will win. - Love oxox Anne-Lise :)
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