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The Folly of Youth

I was so inexperienced, gullible, and childish. 
Ah youth's folly, so brave and yet wildish. 
So witless and terribly naive
Sometimes I feel I can’t believe.
 
We smelt the fragrant whiff of pine needles, 
crunched crispy as we sang the songs of the Beatles,
as we trekked alone up the hill 
that towered majestically with thrill,
a few miles from our hometown. 
The fragrance of Fall, followed by leaves brown. 
Love crept in losing all our senses, 
Little serious thoughts of consequences. 

We were too young, actions should not be
But a fool who could not foresee 
the imminent prospective on the horizon 
that stretched so far, far away as the sun was risin`. 
I did not care, who did in those days? 
A child was born, and we were in a haze, 

A baby that needed money nowhere to be found. 
We toiled, we worried, and each debtor a hound.
Help was scarce and youth a thing of the past,
My wife fell sick, and death came too fast. 
I cried as I lost my dear wife but will not forget
The mists of the hill of our first love where we met.

Today I trek that same hill behind our town 
remembering our lost youth though the grass was brown. 
I almost stumble on the dewy grass of dawn,
I feel strong arms helping me on. 
My love, my little Angelina, she saved me from a blow, 
the daughter that was born so many years ago.

1 December 2021

''Y'' Contest
Youth
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by:  Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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La France Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:08 PM
Victor, wonderful writing and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "Y" Contest, love the image also ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write and picture. Love It. Have a blessed day/week.................
George Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 4:58 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your win in the Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance!
Edmonds  Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 10:53 AM
That’s so lovely Victor, an insight into your past, happy times with your beautiful wife and lass. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle Belle
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 10:27 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Kitchin Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 3:21 AM
A beautiful poem Victor, young love of our youth, we never forget, love the ending! Hugs
Peck Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 2:28 PM
What a beautiful memory is little Angelita.Your poem is written beautifully. Congratulations on your win
Gilmour Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 3:25 AM
dearest Victor this is so beautiful my friend, romantic and yet sad and I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Daniel Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 10:53 PM
This is a lovely poem, Victor, great rhymes used:)
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 10:08 AM
this is just beautiful, Victor. I think I am just a bit younger than you. I was a pre-teen when Beatles were super popular. My foolishness came later in the 70's!!
Buehler Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Your wonderful poem contains both sadness and the joy of love's triumph, Victor. It was a great pleasure to read it today. Enjoy your day, Evelyn
Jayasankar Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 6:15 AM
The follies of youth, it's aftermath, and the pain of losing the loved one... all well expressed in this beautifully crafted poem Victor. Best wishes for the contest... God bless... ~ Ani
Roper Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 6:14 AM
My naive youth, was just that, didn't do the folly, so brave and or the wildish brought up to catholic. Great poem for Constance's contest. Hugs Eve
Ball Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 1:31 PM
You paint such a beautiful and vivid picture of love here my friend. Good stuff. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Love your story, the way it begins and the difficulties found in early marriage, the sadness of an early death and the child left behind who comforted.
Rose  Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Children are a gift of love when two young people meet and fall in love, May the hills turn green once again as you remember the good days you lived through, with Lily, thank you for your tender poem today, much love
Cunningham Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 8:36 AM
We all look back sometimes with regret and we wonder if we should have done things differently the folly of youth. Tom
Poet Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Victor, your poem is stunning. You accomplished a fantastic job capturing and explaining childhood. Losing a dear relative is awful, but I feel that losing one's spouse would endure a deep and permanent agony from which one would never be capable of recovering. Best wishes for the contest
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 5:05 AM
You captured and described youth well, Victor. I too have sung to the Beatles many, many times in my younger years. Today, I am still singing them. Probably because of a lot of crap that's on the radio these days (lol) and also because how very good the Beatles were. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Charlie
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Thank you Charles. I loved the Beatles but also many singers of that age.
Pandit Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 5:02 AM
The first two stanzas set the stage for a ride in the memory lane. Wonderfully descriptive details bring the past alive for the reader. Emotions splendidly evoked in your signature style, Victor.
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 3:24 AM
Emotional and descriptive work that you have penned in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. The pain and grief of losing a close family member is hard but I would think that losing one's mate would be a deep pain that one never overcomes. Sara
May Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 2:52 AM
You captured the theme of youth well in this beautiful and somber write, best wishes
Skelly Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 2:37 AM
Hello Victor, retro look at impetuous youth, with a very nice twist at the end...Delice
George Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 1:56 AM
Youth is a reckless period of time.... a time when one never bothers to weigh the pros and cons of an action. So sad is the story and it sends a tinge of pain through my senses. Hope it is fictional !
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 2:10 AM
It's not a personal poem. My wife is dead but we loved each other very much. You can see poems about her.
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