The Flower

The flower screams for silent caring, Thunder whispers thoughts of sharing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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artlyy Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 9:02 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 11:02 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Vaso Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 12:36 AM
Wonderful, sometimes is the thunder that is the caring, and the silence that strangles life!
Leachet Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:32 PM
This is a great analogy :) I enjoyed it
White Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 4:37 AM
Heh! Those seem to contradict so much, but that is what makes it so beautiful. I love it :)
Solomon Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 5:55 AM
Thanks heaps Darren that means so much to me. :-)
May Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 7:39 AM
Beautiful write..enjoyed
Solomon Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 5:29 PM
Thankyou so much Joseph for your kind words. :-)
Wolf Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 7:39 AM
I absolutely love this! What a fantastic analogy of nature at work here!
Solomon Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Thanks heaps mate.. I faintly remember writing this at your place back in the day. :-)
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