The Flip Side

THE FLIP SIDE new day just dawning mother earth bathed in first light high pine black crows scream

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/13/2011 11:02:00 AM

Awesome image, Daver. I was in Georgia with no computer when this poem was posted, but I'm glad I had the chance to enjoy it now. I bet this is just how dawn looks in your part of the country. Beautiful! Love and Christmas blessings, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/10/2011 4:26:00 PM

Picture perfect with the sound turned up. Love these ku's that say something!

M.I.A .

Date: 12/9/2011 9:28:00 PM

Dear Daver, eventhough my english slang is not up-to-date but i liked how the turned you made in this haiku. soft and glowing. thank you for stopping by and your kind comment. it is something that I do want to achieve, letting go that is ~.~

Jack Horne

Date: 12/9/2011 2:24:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Daver. I bet those clocks were beautiful

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2011 11:46:00 PM

Yes, it IS the flip side!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2011 9:44:00 PM

This is a great haiku, daver. You were so sweet to buy my book. And I really hope you fix the "blockage" problem. I see your poems coming to my box but I realize it's no use to comment to them until you fix whatever is blocking me. Thanks so much for all your kindness. luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2011 4:35:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative nature poem..I enjoy watching and hearing the crows of early morn..They give my husband the blues for the are bad on his garden...Sara