The Flag

it hung there like a noose
around the neck of a people
a road map in red and black 
with a series of right turns
this destination unknown to me 
a child half of twenty-one

father was seeking 
shocked at what he found
his stare a chisel to stone

a large oak desk
the trio who sat behind it
bald, boots, tattoos
with menace and calm
grabbed hold of our eyes 
aborting peripheral vision

a three second eternity
chilled the air
then the middle one chirped
may we help you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/1/2023 8:39:00 PM
Dear Richard, your poem is powerful and had me transported and transfixed in these chilling moments described in your laser-focused verse.. “a three second eternity”. Your third stanza held me in such a grip I barely breathed.. it took a few moments after reading your last line to find my breath again. “Menace and calm”.. a lethal mix! Terrifying! Your potent pen shines a vital light, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/4/2023 12:12:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you dear friend. This poem had been brewing inside of me for years and finally came to fruition. Be safe, be blessed...................peace!
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