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it hung there like a noose around the neck of a people a road map in red and black with a series of right turns this destination unknown to me a child half of twenty-one father was seeking shocked at what he found his stare a chisel to stone a large oak desk the trio who sat behind it bald, boots, tattoos with menace and calm grabbed hold of our eyes aborting peripheral vision a three second eternity chilled the air then the middle one chirped may we help you

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Date: 6/1/2023 8:39:00 PM
Dear Richard, your poem is powerful and had me transported and transfixed in these chilling moments described in your laser-focused verse.. “a three second eternity”. Your third stanza held me in such a grip I barely breathed.. it took a few moments after reading your last line to find my breath again. “Menace and calm”.. a lethal mix! Terrifying! Your potent pen shines a vital light, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Ricky Muse
Date: 6/4/2023 12:12:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you dear friend. This poem had been brewing inside of me for years and finally came to fruition. Be safe, be blessed...................peace!

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