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The Five Starting Their Day

The keen necks in the blue eyes Looking for the pink goal posts She was six feet tall at the grassy ground Sketching the angles and lines of the life Playing in front of her like the young cubs Beside her the young brown lad Standing like the cloudless sun Holding the firm hands of the dreaming girl With a lot of maps of the hills and plains Seated on the eye lashes to take shape Next to him the frayed branches  Of the skinny old birch tree Busy with the crimson and grey pictures Left behind in the tales of light and shade Crowding now in the pale light of the veins Of brown leaves resting soft on The shoulders of the child that Fondles the dog with its eyes closed in joy Leaving it the child holds the branch tightly That sparkles in the waves of the moment The sunshine holds the hands of Life in the rainbows of time ______________________________________________ March 13, 2018 Seven-Ten - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 3/20/2018 9:49:00 PM
WoW! This poem blanked my mind w/it's brilliant imagery, Probir. Walk me thru the park of your mind on this beautiful day prose. You're at the top of your poetic game on this one. Exceptional write. Love and peace always.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/21/2018 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, Freddie ... The worth of the poem doesn't lie as much in it as in your perception ....
Date: 3/13/2018 2:07:00 PM
Well written Probir..best for a win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2018 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay
Date: 3/13/2018 10:43:00 AM
The last two lines are fabulous Probir. so very well done my friend...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/13/2018 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie ...

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