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The Fisherman's Tale

The sun bid farewell to the cold dusk sky, Fog drew its curtains around the village, My boat came closer, I let out a sigh. She was there smiling, waiting on the dock, I glanced at the empty net, then at her, In my thoughts, I heard the bell of the clock. Her smile lifted my heavy weight of guilt, I held her hand as my feet touched the dock, She handed my lunch, revived my heart's wilt. It was a sandwich, a lettuce on top, A tomato below, not a king's meal, But no less sweeter than god's golden crop. We walked in embrace under the full moon, The bridge, now bathed in the lamp's golden light, I prayed in heart, let the night not end soon. Sponsor - Eve Roper Contest Name - Put Yourself In Their Shoes Date - 24/09/2023

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Date: 12/20/2023 9:32:00 AM
I so love your fourth stanza Ranaditya. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/11/2023 9:36:00 PM
Nice one! And really loved the last stanza!
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Ranaditya Adhikary
Date: 9/16/2023 9:00:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind visit to my page, Harveen :-)
Date: 8/28/2023 10:52:00 PM
"I prayed in heart, let the night not end soon" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Ranaditya Adhikary
Date: 8/29/2023 2:12:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind visit to my page, Christuraj:-)
Date: 8/28/2023 12:34:00 PM
Thank you for your creative poem for the contest. Congratulations on your win. Eve
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Ranaditya Adhikary
Date: 8/29/2023 2:12:00 AM
Eve, thank you selecting my poem in your contest... :-)
Date: 8/24/2023 2:31:00 PM
I love this poem. Some great lines- ‘Fog drew its curtains around the village’.Very well written and I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes
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Ranaditya Adhikary
Date: 8/24/2023 9:17:00 PM
Thank you very much for your appreciation and Thanks for visiting my page, Christina:-)
Date: 8/24/2023 12:45:00 PM
Yeah, no fish sandwich tonight. She doesn't seem to mind. Nice tale
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Ranaditya Adhikary
Date: 8/24/2023 12:49:00 PM
Ha Ha, Thanks for visiting my page, Tom :-)

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