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A plethora of colorful wildflowers are in bloom in the country, and the hay fields smell sweet, for April showers have washed the pungent cow manure deep into the ground to nourish the crop's hungry roots. The songbirds are brooding their clutch of eggs, and soon, I’ll hear their hatchling chicks squabbling over their meal of caterpillars and worms. Soon, their flight feathers will fill in, and they will exercise their wings. Preparing for fledgling and the miracle of flight, when they'll soar into the heavens, touch the face of God, and achieve the impossible. Summer is on its way, and all the young children’s hearts are beating wildly in anticipation of a summer of fun, enjoying a well-earned vacation from schoolwork.
the sun shines brightly pollywog morph into frogs... the fish are biting (Haibun) 7/1/2018

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Date: 7/12/2018 8:58:00 AM
Back to congratulate you again on your win again. A wonderful haibun.
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/10/2018 1:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win. I enjoyed your summery haibun.
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Date: 7/10/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Agnes, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/10/2018 12:07:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.
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Date: 7/10/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Line, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/7/2018 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Awesome imagery from the very beginning. Enjoyed!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2018 11:36:00 AM
Thanks Susan, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/5/2018 10:03:00 AM
The truth, I read to much into pollywog, and tadpoles being black I am not so sure I have, it being North American dialect for a tadpole. Apart from the latter, you dropped the s, off it. Having given my critique I really did enjoy it, me being a bit of both in my time, in fact, watch birds period. Congratulations Emile on your placement and thanks for participating, Mick
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/5/2018 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Mick, I'm from Canada and I've used both pollywog and tadpole to describe the larval stage of a frog, (A common summer thing), I have never associated them with anything else...sorry but you read too much into my use of pollywog my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/1/2018 7:39:00 PM
Well done, Emile. Beautiful imagery.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/2/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/1/2018 3:31:00 PM
absolutely charming Emile I love your vivid description of the hatchling birds:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/1/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, Your visits are truly appreciated my friend, Emile.

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