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The First Time

Gentle whispers shared Burning embers rekindle Flames reaching upward Silhouettes moving slowly Dormant pleasures awakened

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Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 12/15/2018 10:23:00 AM

My first stumble upon it, a lovely poem and romantic image.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 4:42:00 PM

This one really set a tone!! Nice.

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/9/2010 12:55:00 PM

Sharon a sensual Tanka, I just love your last line ;) enjoy your week ~Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2010 9:30:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Shar. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/9/2010 6:52:00 AM

Very sensuous images with nice rhyming, Sharon

Jancarl Campi

Date: 11/8/2010 8:40:00 PM

there is lots of loving movement in these lines. I like the way it builds up from "Gentle whispers shared" to "Dormant pleasures awakened" It is a beautiful write

James Fraser

Date: 11/8/2010 4:01:00 PM

Lovely warm loving Tanka Sharon, oh for dormant pleasures to be awakened >> James :)