The First Time

The First Time ...for Juvie Sounds will be sharper and keener, and tastes have a fresh new appeal, aromas will drift like the first breaths of spring and all colours be vivid and real; each of my senses will shiver and shift in the wind like the eddying sand, and I knew that my heart had at last found its haven the first time that I held your hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/2/2011 5:26:00 PM
Found this really sweet and yet not overly romantic... just perfectly sincere. Less is often more! I admire your sensitivity. Thanks for opening up and sharing - I'm sure others can relate to this. P.S. Thanks for reading my poem and for your comment. Looking forward to reading more of yours!
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:42:00 PM
Another beauty, Keith, so lovely! Juvie must be delighted with your words and praise. Nice to read...thanks so much for sharing! Best to you and yours, Mikki
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Date: 5/17/2010 12:53:00 AM
Shes one lucky girl..I know how many of your poems are about her..truely lovely. BG
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Date: 5/16/2010 11:13:00 PM
This is so...expressive. I felt as if I were seeing through different eyes.
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Date: 5/16/2010 10:19:00 PM
So Romantic..great poem Keith..Charma
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