Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Free verse

The First Step

By looking at the “facade” you cannot judge.
And you can’t deduce who is “imperfect.”
Better not crush and “mask” your emotions. 
Encounter the poignant humiliations bravely.
Explore answers for “cracked” and “broken” relations. 
Check once if any of your actions are “flawed.”
Give up the “torn” and trivial beliefs.
Build your relations on the pillars of hope and courage. 
Never expect that somebody would take the charge.
Come out of the “illusion” and take the first step to rebuild.

Writing Prompt - Flawed - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
Date: 21-06-2021
placed: 4th

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Constance La France June 25, 2021 at 5:05 PM Patri, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your poem. Good use of the required words, peace _ Constance Patri Venkata Ramana June 27, 2021 at 5:25 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Christuraj Alex June 24, 2021 at 8:48 PM Beautiful creation. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana June 27, 2021 at 5:24 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.