The First Night, Indian Style

I met a "God Sent" Indian Giver once
A theater costume manager named Hans
Acting on stage
I felt just rage
He chased me shouting: "Give me baak my pants!"

for Poet Destroyer's Contest "Indian Giver"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Walker  Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 1:53 AM
Nice... I laughed... Verlena
Brown Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 5:17 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Iolanda. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Iolanda, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)
Duffin Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 11:58 PM
congrats on this one, which was a great take on the expression! Luv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Congratulation Iolanda on a worthy Limerick's place of honored place. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Iolanda
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Iolanda
A   Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 11:20 PM
IOLANDA, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 8:51 PM
haha, very cute, Iolanda!
Kendrick Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 4:56 AM
Good one..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..I am glad that I chose this one to read today for I needed a chuckle..Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 7:35 AM
funny....I like it!!
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 1:26 PM
hahaha, very humorous, hilarious and frolicsome limerick on Indian Giver, Iolanda. Wonderful humor
Haick Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Wishing you good luck in the contest, dear Iolanda! Blessings to you this holy season!Love, Audrey
Palli Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:46 AM
silly silly! I giggled
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