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The First Night, Indian Style

I met a "God Sent" Indian Giver once A theater costume manager named Hans Acting on stage I felt just rage He chased me shouting: "Give me baak my pants!" for Poet Destroyer's Contest "Indian Giver"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/31/2014 1:53:00 AM
Nice... I laughed... Verlena
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Date: 12/27/2010 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:50:00 AM
Iolanda, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:01:00 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon
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Date: 12/26/2010 11:58:00 PM
congrats on this one, which was a great take on the expression! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:39:00 AM
Congratulation Iolanda on a worthy Limerick's place of honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Iolanda
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Iolanda
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Date: 12/25/2010 11:20:00 PM
IOLANDA, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.
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Date: 12/16/2010 8:51:00 PM
haha, very cute, Iolanda!
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Date: 12/15/2010 4:56:00 AM
Good one..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..I am glad that I chose this one to read today for I needed a chuckle..Sara
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Date: 12/13/2010 7:35:00 AM
funny....I like it!!
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:26:00 PM
hahaha, very humorous, hilarious and frolicsome limerick on Indian Giver, Iolanda. Wonderful humor
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:37:00 AM
Wishing you good luck in the contest, dear Iolanda! Blessings to you this holy season!Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:46:00 AM
silly silly! I giggled
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