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The First Flower I Chose

The First Flower I Chose You were my rose, the first flower I chose A beauty so fair, such shine in your hair You I chose, the finest ever love rose Asked on a dare, the prettiest girl there Soon we wed, pretty flower graced my bed Nights sent such bliss, heaven I did not miss Flames in bed, want no other instead Honey that kiss, love never was like this Years together, in good and bad weather Loving every night, touching sweet just right Joy our weather, sweet kisses a feather Sexy the sight, your naked body at night My rose did cast, true love that did so last I held so fast, to that ship's greatest mast 08-31-2014 Contest- Form Sonnet Regina Riddle Contest Name , Sonnet on a Intimate Relationship Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Total # Words: 114

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Date: 8/8/2015 10:54:00 PM
I was counting how many sonnets you had here at Soup but I lost count. I'd say maybe close to 200. I may have seen this one a long time ago. It has many comments on it and is a golden oldie for you by now. Sweet and romantic. I came to it because of the cute title.
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Date: 9/3/2014 9:34:00 AM
Congrats on FINE WIN, Robert
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:53:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats on this lovely winning write!
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Date: 9/3/2014 6:52:00 AM
Dear Robert, Just stopping back to offer congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2014 12:34:00 AM
Robert, rated 7. Superlative write enjoyed! Verlena
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Date: 9/2/2014 12:09:00 AM
This year was my 20th anniversary. Best 20 of my life.
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Date: 9/1/2014 11:29:00 PM
This should do well, married can be sexy!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2014 11:34:00 PM
Thank you Richard. A love filled marriage is pure bliss. We have been married for ten years now and it has been just great! Blessed with our 7 year old son Justin and that's the icy on the cake...
Date: 9/1/2014 6:24:00 PM
This is perfect Robert...How wonderful....Tim
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2014 10:49:00 PM
Thanks much Tim. High praise indeed coming from you...
Date: 9/1/2014 2:13:00 PM
Dear Robert, You are both blessed to have found such happiness. It's always wonderful to read joyful poems about wedded bliss. God blessed you and your wife. Love, Carolyn
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2014 10:48:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. We are truly blessed and triply so because of our dear son Justin.. Love of our lives!!
Date: 9/1/2014 1:51:00 AM
:) :) :) :) :) :)....that is what I feel about this sonnet. GOOD luck in the contest. :) It's beautiful. I'm glad your rose has no thorns.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2014 10:47:00 PM
Thanks Eileen . Rose with no thorns, a treasure Depth of true love the measure Love memories from long past Shame , it did not last...
Date: 9/1/2014 1:14:00 AM
Great passionate write Robert! The first flower of life is a real treasure! Best wishes!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2014 10:45:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Yes, the truest treasure is usually that first flower(love).. Even if true it may still not last because people are fickle and ever changing.. Sad when such love fails but life has many sad experiences .

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