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The First Day, I Keep Your eyes, will be the stars, in my sky. Your smile, the very desire... of my being. I will etch your lovely face, upon my heart, as you answer yes... I will keep it, there forever. You will never age. You are beautiful now, you will always be beautiful! Time will have no power. I will keep this moment, locked… and saved, that no one will ever, understand the value, more than I, and my Lord. If we are blessed with children, I will tell them, "I was accepted by an angel, graced in my life by God, to know their mother... as my wife. If we are not, I will love you… and my love for you will just make all children ours… to laugh and share a life with God. Please, be mine. Amen

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Date: 12/7/2019 4:59:00 PM
Nicely crafted and sweet poem Ann Well done.
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/7/2019 7:01:00 PM
:) Ty friend. Blessings on your house this Christmas... and always... Ann
Date: 12/7/2019 11:39:00 AM
This is so nice. Well written! :)
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/7/2019 7:00:00 PM
:) Merry Christmas... Blessing on you and your house... hugs. Ann
Date: 12/7/2019 11:00:00 AM
Hello Ann! What a lovely, lovely write. Panagiota
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/7/2019 7:00:00 PM
Humbly... ty friend. Merry Christmas... Ann

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