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The first buds of love

Attracted to her Since my youth, Like the unstoppable swerve Of an iron filing Towards a magnet, I had left the reigns Of my imagination free To let it weave A necklace of poems To glorify the mystery I had seen hung around her. Fear it was not, When we had first met, Yet, the words failed To emerge from me Pointless though They'd have been. Such was the influence Her presence had on me That the silence Was the only edifice I could rest upon To feel the intensity Of that instant That had catapulted me Into a state of love And, its longings That give it wings I knew not 'til then.

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Date: 11/8/2017 5:43:00 PM
This feeling is unique and sensational. You have expressed a universal emotion. I love the words you have used. Congrats.
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Date: 11/5/2017 10:38:00 AM
Wonderful buds of love, impressive and touching wings of first love. Best regards.
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Date: 11/4/2017 5:10:00 PM
Pramod, You poems are delightfully balanced and paint beautiful pictures in the minds of their readers. Terri Stiles
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Date: 11/3/2017 7:57:00 PM
Very softly, beautifully written poem. Eloquently expressions of attraction. Thanks
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Date: 11/2/2017 5:10:00 AM
Really a wonderful poem...sir.., can't describe in words...lovely :)
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Date: 11/1/2017 10:28:00 PM
Nice Piece. recollecting my Teen Ages. You are an Indian. Where do you stay ? Best wishes
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Date: 11/1/2017 11:27:00 AM
It made me remember the girl am crazy about in college but can’t bring myself to chat her up. Well done Paramod.
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Date: 11/1/2017 11:24:00 AM
WOW ! Well done. She must be a wonderful girl. I'm not sure I know how the story ends but suspect "Wonderfully". Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 10/22/2017 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations! Nicely done.
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Date: 10/22/2017 7:16:00 AM
Congrats Pramod, for your WIN with this fine piece! ;-)
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Date: 10/21/2017 8:26:00 PM
Lovely, Pramod! Congrats!
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Date: 10/21/2017 6:42:00 PM
Pramod, congratulations on your win well done. I like the sentence , "To let it weave A necklace of poems." :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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