The First Beauty Queen

Adam was formed of dust with lust
So God gave Eve quite a big bust
An apple a day
Made apple pie pay
And Eve was crowned, "Miss Upper Crust"!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:14 AM
She was "Miss Upper Crust" because she apparently had the upper hand in their relationship.
Leffanta Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 12:34 PM
Aw, come on! You know the Devil made her do it! Aloha! Rico
Devonshire Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:50 AM
"Miss Upper Crust"! Hilarious, Rico. Only you could transform the book of Genesis into a limerick! Hugs, Carolyn
Leffanta Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Some people think the crust is the best part of apple pie . . . .Aloha! Rico
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 8:30 PM
great end line!!
Leffanta Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:26 AM
She was tops, alright! Aloha! Rico
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:03 PM
One of the best of the 'Adam and Eve' genre I've read in quite a while. Kudos, Rico! :) gw
Leffanta Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:25 AM
I have yet to figure out why a "Miss" is a queen instead of a princess . . . . .Thank you for dropping by and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Faulkner Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 3:51 PM
But - an apple a day, doesn't keep the snakes away (apparently!)
Leffanta Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:23 AM
The Devil you say? Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 3:31 PM
ha ha ha so so clever Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Happy to have you back again! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 12:11 PM
Giggles Galore <3
Leffanta Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Mahalo nui loa, Mo! Aloha! Rico
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